| "Latex Blues" Reviews/Comments [ 110 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sweet_Lemon69 On: July 21, 2003 01:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good!! XD i loved ur fic! it was funny and sad and so cute!! this condom thing...very original.....well to me. soooo funny when inuyasha opened them up and then even better when he told kagome they were too small for him! i'd luv to get a piece of him if he wuz really bigger than "Extra Large" XD |
Reviewed By: Mariangela [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 00:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! This fic's brilliant!!! You got me laughing so hard, that my aunt told me to shut up cuz it's 12:35 am *lol* Anyway, this is great, I love it... Keep going girl cuz you're doing it very well
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Reviewed By: NekoYasha On: July 20, 2003 22:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was hilarious! This is definatly one of the most original and humorous Inu stories I've read so far, I lol when he was trying to figure out what they were ^^ His declaration that they were too small was a riot too; fabulous job! please oh please update soon!! |
Reviewed By: Yoraeryu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2003 21:43 EDT
Comment/Review:
Aahhh!! You can't end it there!! C'mon... Please continue!! GREAT fic!!! |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2003 19:48 EDT
Comment/Review:
It feels like the story's not quite over yet. Kagome's still worried about "repercussions," and Inuyasha...
The "size" thing is fictionalized, no? Those things are built to fit anyone, they could cover the leg of a chair. Usually when a boy says that they're too small, he means that the ring on the edge is too tight.
Well, Kagome probably knows 1. that the "method" Inuyasha used isn't all that effective and 2. that there are other ways which are. |
Reviewed By: Calinda On: July 20, 2003 15:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If that's the end i want to know what happens, please keep writing the story |
Reviewed By: Julie K. On: July 19, 2003 23:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this! Of course the condom part was just a riot, especially when Inuyasha tried to figure out what they were and later when he declared they were too small. Fabulous lemon too! This was just a really fun fic to read. Good job! Hope you do more. |
Reviewed By: Demoness of the night On: July 19, 2003 23:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was great,. i loved it and i really hope chapter 10 isn't it. please don't let it be it i would like to read more and see how everyone reacts and the relationship oh them. well u beter write more or i will hunt u don't and force u to write more |
Reviewed By: kookie On: July 19, 2003 22:42 EDT
Comment/Review:
Bravo! Funny and sexy! |
Reviewed By: ElysianKiss On: July 19, 2003 22:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very cute fic! I hope that chapter 10 really isn't it. I would like to read more about their developing relationship. Great job! |
Reviewed By: ills (illsdgx@hotmail.com) On: July 19, 2003 22:41 EDT
Comment/Review:
that was soo cute |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2003 22:04 EDT
Comment/Review:
This was a great fic ^^ The comedy in it was great, as were the more serious parts. Nice work! |
Reviewed By: Tanuki-Girl789 On: July 25, 2003 16:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol..i give your fic all 10s! This was one hell of of a fanfic. The story was very good and well thought out. And it wasnt out of character. You protrayed the characters very well. Good Job. i would love to read more of your works. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: jtocool On: July 22, 2003 18:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
in chapter 9 you forgot kagomes "fisical verginity" the flap of skin just inside the vigina but thats just a small detale.
i loved thed fic thou it was grate and it beter continue or else |
Reviewed By: Babsie On: July 22, 2003 19:28 EDT
Comment/Review:
This was sooo good.
I love it.
Will you think on doing a continuation?
Congratulations for your work. |
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