| "Expectation" Reviews/Comments [ 82 ] |
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2003 21:46 CST
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I'm sooo glad you updated, I was beginning to worry about you!!
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2003 11:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have a question, and i would love it if you would answer me. Why is inuyasha not telling Kagome that he loves her? Will he ever, and when? and does he even? I am really confused as to his position in everything. Plese answer. Kudos to you for a great chapter!! update soon!! ^~^
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Reviewed By: misticknight2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2003 06:05 CST
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! NO,NO,NO,NO,NO,NO,NO. Why did you have to end it there? So close to Miroku finally getting Sango and then he does that. And what about Kouga? What will happen when he finds out that the 'insulent pup' got 'his' woman? *WACK* OUCH!!!! sorry about that Inu Yasha just cracked me in the skull for that referance.*SMACK* OK, OK. Jeez he's being touchy tonight. Oh well, Keep writing, I want to see the next chapter soon.*ducks under inuyashas next swing* Oops, gotta go.^-^ *runs off with Inu-sama hot on his heels*
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Reviewed By: Irrel (not signed in u_u) On: December 21, 2003 16:16 CST
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Oh, I waited so long and it was only Sango/Miroku haha doesn't matter, it was good anyway!
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Reviewed By: dostovel45 On: December 15, 2003 00:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very basically, i think this fanfic is ridiculously good. It is more than entertaining. The way it is written makes it seem like this really could happen to the pair. If anything, please finish this fic. It would be a blessing to most of us anyways.
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Reviewed By: Irrel (not signed in u_u) On: November 17, 2003 20:15 CST
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whaaat? that's it? oh, c'mon... this is too good! ^_^ BTW... I hate kikyo ¬¬
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Reviewed By: cutie_pie_2101_1012 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2003 12:11 CST
Comment/Review:
update soon this story is awsome
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Title: Yay
Reviewed By: FireStorm777 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2003 20:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I read your Instant Noodles FanFic page and I loved every word of every fic. This is no exception. Kudos and please continue.
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Reviewed By: Shinobu/miwaofKurama On: October 18, 2003 20:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS GRRREEAAT!!!!!!! /bwonderful job!/b PLEEAASE pretty please write more!!! Mabe even add SesshouMaru-sama!!! Good job! Nice idea of adding Kouga! I sense a confrontationfor inuyasha. Keep up the good work!! ;)
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Reviewed By: Ehioze On: October 17, 2003 12:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WRITE MORE PLEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAASSSSSSSSEEEEEEE!!!!
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Reviewed By: originalNekoYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2003 01:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! good story plot, very emotional. this is wonderfully written so keep writing! please update soon
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Reviewed By: flame81 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2003 23:16 CDT
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good well-plotted story, keep on the work!
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Title: Oh no! My precious paragraph deviders!
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2003 18:42 CDT
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Curses; they suck! At least the story was fun. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The dream sequence, hmmm... I can see all those things blending together in Kagome's dream. Fear of familial disapproval, fear that Kikyo's accusations are more than half-truths, fear of losing her education, a few fuzzy benefits...
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Title: Blame the New Math!
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2003 18:40 CDT
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I grow weary of mm rendering my comments into one paragraph... The new math was to blame for everything. Amen! What if Mama finds out? Honey, if Mama's seen your tummy, she already knows. The dreamlike math was a good touch. Kept it from looking like a contrived dream-lemon. I was just thinking that the Miroku / Sango arc was a little on the boring side, and now Kouga shows up. Mmmmmmm! Now I can't wait! I must see if my html tags have worked!
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Title: ? ....the future ruler of the world! muahahaa....
Reviewed By: a lazi tOkU-cHaN On: September 06, 2003 22:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YO!!!! hilo Nanda! how my forum daughter doing? (that sounded odd).... LOOK!!! it's the rE v I e Wi E- mOb I l E!! as Ithilwen calls it.... ^.~ Weeeeellllll...... wanna popsicle? .:looks at Nanda who's about to go crazi:. JKJKJK!!! ^^''' well, I really don't know what to say, except I love this, and I feel so sorri for everone! (with the exception of Kikyou) ^_^ so update as soon as you get over that damn writers block! I know! meditation!!! ^^* thats what my dad says....=_=
Close your eyes and take a deep breath. focus on your breathing. Now in your minds eye, see an auther being crushed by bricks. imagine that author you. imagine that that is your writers block. Then start to lift the blocks with an invisible force \, and proceed to crumble them until they're a fine powder and blows in the mind-created wind. Whe the wind dies away, you now see..... a SUPER AUTHOR!!! WITH LOT OF IDEAS!!!
^_^'''' well.... everything up to the last sentence.... eheheheheeee..... ^_^ |
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