Reviewed By: Chas On: July 20, 2003 14:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's nice. I've had a thing with reading angsty stories lately, and this is quite satisfying. I would love to see a little bit of romance, as it seems like Trunks and Pan just go together well. Great story, but you might want to add a little detail. Good job, keep writing. |
