| "Bishies Without Shirts" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Title: CheeseMe
Reviewed By: Cheeseme [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 21:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! i love this! i got halfway through the second chapter and i have to say that this is pricless! Rumiko Takahashi would be proud!
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Title: wowness!
Reviewed By: cute_e_pie999 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 04:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol wow! that's the best storey ever..... long, but amazing! lol i loved it! atually, i love ALL ur stories! ^_^ u have the characters down 2 a sience! lol the only thing **strictly personal** since i only watch the american version, that doesn't have any major swearing, i'm not used to all the "fuck" & "bitch" & "shit" & "crap" lol but it's still REALLY good! lol i LOVE the ending! lol & the "i told you it was good!" lol anyways keep writing, you've got a talent for it! ^_^ ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Ph34rTheEars On: April 24, 2004 23:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Long read but worth it. Very good overall and only a few things i didn't like.
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Reviewed By: AsianEyes [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 21:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was certainly a very long read...and it was a great read too. You two are very talented writers, and when you fuse two superpowers, you get...Bishies Without Shirts. Wonderful job, I love you're fanfic!
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Title: Awsome!
Reviewed By: Bekki On: March 16, 2004 13:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was awsome! It was very fun to read and each chapter was a cliffhanger! I love the way Sesshomaru turned out. Inuyasha was a bit stupid at times lol. Overall it was very good ! Thanks for killing my boredom!
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Title: Ooh!
Reviewed By: KohakuTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2004 16:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh! I just spent the past couple of days reading this entire fic, since I saw all that fanart on here . . . And I have to say its so cutely amazing! I can't believe you've not gotten more reviews! Thank you so much for writing this! :) And keep it up! I couldn't even tell two people wrote it, it blended so well! :)
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Reviewed By: Shortie On: January 19, 2004 21:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Simply put, this was an awesome fic! I loved it! A fic this size usually takes me a week to sit donw and read, while this one merely took me 3 days. It was very well written and was very original. Anyway, this was a great story
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Reviewed By: navyboarder17 (not logged in) On: January 19, 2004 19:41 CST
Comment/Review:
awesome. Diablos42069 tipped me off on how good this story was and gave it to me. I just started it today. It's really good and i'm oinly half way through. I like the details and how u make the chapters pretty long. It's really funny too. THe poor guys.. wearing pathetic cartoon character shirts. I swear if my g/f ever made me where one of those thins I'd shred it, then burn it, then burry the remains! Ok I will reiview l8er... wow u only have 6 reivews?? freaky, this story is soo good!
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Title: Great story
Reviewed By: AngelHeart On: January 02, 2004 00:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this story very much. I couldn't stop laughing! It was funny and sad all at the same time. You are a good writer and I will read more of your stories. ^_^
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Title: KICK ASS
Reviewed By: diablos42069 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2003 13:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story has to be the best Inu yasha fan fic I have ever read in my life!!! and i've read a bunch. anyways... great story!! im gonna go read your other stories now.... keep up the good work!! arianna
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Reviewed By: Sugarhighs:P [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2003 23:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was extremely good, seeing as I've spent a portion of my evening reading this fanfiction. I love your way of portraying the brother's relationship in a very realistic way. I wouldn't be surprised if in the actual series, they ended up like that. The only thing I've got to comment on is the beginning...it seemed a little fast paced, the way with Sesshoumaru asking for help. But all in all, it worked out fine, didn't it? I look forward to more great stories from you both. ~Jessica ^_^
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Reviewed By: Lady Fang On: July 26, 2003 19:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was the cutest, most touching Inu-Yasha story I have ever read. It was so awesome. I loved how Sesshoumaru had a change of heart. It was so sweet. I liked all the twists and turns in the plot. It was a very good story. |
Reviewed By: Tatoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 01:54 CDT
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Great story. I loved the whole thing. Nice to have a sad but very touching history for Sesshoumaru. And I love the way you worked out the sibling thing with the brothers without making either one unrealistically sappy. |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2003 16:45 CDT
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I love your writing style...you are great at writing comedy, but there is always the underlying seriousness in the fics I've read by you so far. That combination, so well balanced, is hard to find in fanfics. Great work ^^ I almost didn't read this, thinking it was one where they lived in the modern day, every day...but I'm very glad I did! |
