| "Painful Debt" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2007 09:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CONTINUE>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> ;>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
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Reviewed By: MysticDarkFairy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 15:33 CDT
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if Yami finds out he is going to get his ass kicked man. This is going to be funny when Kabia gets hurt. Hopefully Yami notices that it's Yugi before anything happens. *Holds Yugi and Yami plushies while saying "It'll be alright, I promise"* O_o Okay this is her Yami Sarina and she will have to get back to you after she stops her insane plot to kill Kabia. *Looks over at Clarissa sitting on the floor with a blueprint infront of her* HEY is that the blueprints for kabia's mansion. You are in so much trouble. Please update soon. I must go kill Clarissa right now. * Runs after her with a baseball bat*
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Reviewed By: Koishii No Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 22:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update this soon! I can't wait to see what happens! I also added this fic to my faves. ^^
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Reviewed By: JustSomeone On: November 12, 2003 17:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow, this is interesting. Kaiba and Yami going out? Hows Kaiba gonna keep Yami from knowing that kaibas sex toy is his hikari? I mean the hair and eyes thing can change, and the mind link can be shut. but if they share the same soul so to speak ( how do you hide from that) , Thats gonna be interesting how you do that. Also I get that Yami cares for his Hikari ( or else Kaiba wouldnt go to such lenghts to have Yugi conceal his identity) I wonder whats gonna happen when Yami finds out? Finish this story please. Its really edgy so far. ( okay the 8 on the enjoyment factor is cause yugi's getting hurt lol and hes too sweet to get hurt). Oh and the 10 overall cause it featured my favs Yami Yugi and Kaiba.
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Reviewed By: Zinx On: September 25, 2003 23:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMED Kibai he so fucking mean to Yugi *squeez him on the neck* reviwer's thought. The plot of your story is very interesting , but all you wrote was one chp I hope that you will write again soon.
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Reviewed By: purplechaos04 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2003 20:07 CDT
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Very interesting!! I can completely relate to "Dear Lord, if you're merciful, please just kill me now...hmm...no lightning bolts. DAMN!'" I say that all the time... hasn't happened yet. ^_^;; Maybe that's a good thing? |
Reviewed By: Sailor Anime On: July 25, 2003 19:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome Idea! Kaiba is.... evil! Awesome!Can't wait to read more!
~Sailor Anime |
Reviewed By: Yoshimi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 16:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello. You needed some ideas for his hair? Shave his head. Um, Cut his hair short. Use a wig. Use hair spray with some wool* and make his hair look unrecognizable.
*To do this you buy a lot of wool, braid it, tie all your hair in to little rubber bands, and braid the wool into your hair. It looks like dreads. Unfortunatly, when you wash it smells like wet sheep. |
Reviewed By: Ryoko-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2003 15:50 CDT
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It sounds good... Yeah, finally gets the idea that there is the possibilty of sex slavery in YGO!!! (besides me...) Okay, keep it up, I like it. |
Reviewed By: Son Cara [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2003 12:56 CDT
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please update. I read this on fanfiction. But i never did read the next chapters. So please, please, please update. |
Reviewed By: gothatheart/holo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2003 12:44 CDT
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:::screams::NOoooooo!!!!!!!!! Yugi!!! :cries:::Waa....how dare u kaiba!! grrrrr....and Yami is goin out with Kaiba? oooooo.........i wonder what would happen if he finds out bout this..::daydreams::Oo kaiba is goin to get his ass kicked... |
