Title: Intense
Reviewed By: Queen Breeza [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 14:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to admit, when I first started reading your fic, I thought it was going to be boring. But by the time I got through with the first chapter, I realized it was pretty good, even though your first chapter could have been shorter. Keep up the good work, and read mine! :)
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