| "Crimson Tears" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Sugar Crazed Duckie On: June 29, 2005 15:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I see where you got your idea for this story. Like you, I am also a fan of Yu Watase's stories. But I must agree with some of the other reviews I have read. The underlining part is quite annoying. The family relations are quite confusing. And my friend and I burst out laughing at the mental picture of the Great Battousai in sun glasses. I loved that part. Overall I rated your story a 7. That's about a C. There are many things you can fix, but I'm sure if the story keeps going, it'll be exciting. By the way, the enjoyment part, I rated that a 4, cause I like Battousai, better than I like the Rurouni. tee hee hee....but that's just me. Keep writing. You've got quite a load of work ahead of you, but I think you'll be able to pull it off. Good luck. and Keep the imagination flowing. Best wishes. The forever and will always be Sugar Crazed Duckie
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Reviewed By: LC On: June 02, 2004 19:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um...this is a pretty good story. However, I rated this low because of a few reasons. 1) All of the words are underlined. That makes it a bit harder to read. 2) You hardly update. If it was a story that you know the end to, it would be flowing out of you. 3) Kaoru's family isn't very clear. She apparently has only has mother (Kyoko), Soujirou, and Yahiko. I as the reader have no idea who is the grandfather and the rest of the people at Kamiya Internation or whatever. 4) You missed Yahiko. Did Yahiko ever come with Soujirou and Kaoru to Japan? If not, where is he? 5) You miss details. Where do the Kamiyas live? 6) What is Kenshin in this story? That's all I can think of at the moment. Try and go for it.
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Reviewed By: Phoenix wanderer On: January 11, 2004 23:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a really good chapter. It was kind of confusing though and hope the next chapter will clear it up a little bit. Anywho, I look forward to reading the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Phoenix wanderer On: January 11, 2004 23:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a really good chapter. It was kind of confusing though and hope the next chapter will clear it up a little bit. Anywho, I look forward to reading the next chapter!
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Title: HEY
Reviewed By: Chanel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2004 11:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have never read anything this original or exciting in my life!!! It's so great, and I hope you continue the story. Yeah it's confusing, but it's real good. Update soon plz!!!!
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