Reviewed By: Shiroi Hikari On: May 07, 2005 18:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very cool story! It's very original and has some interesting characters. Though I do think the relationship between Dante and Zoe is going at a slightly quick pace, as they hardly know each other (although that's pretty normal for Dante...). Maybe you can have Zoe tell Dante a bit more about her past or something. Anyways, please continue soon! P.S. Can you e-mail me at sarah7177@cs.com when you update this story? I can't log in to my mediaminer account, so I can't put you on my favorites...thanks!
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