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Reviewed By: Ryguy5387 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2007 15:04 CDT
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I wish I wasn't too lazy to see if your e-mail address is floating around here somewhere... haha. I didn't mean to offend you, I just wanted to reasonably point out that your story has a fantastic mix of elements, and is nicely well rounded. Though, I do have to say... Stop teasing me with author's notes! ;_; Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Rinkusu (forgot to sign in) On: March 12, 2007 07:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*I compenent you on the fact that your going on with your series,cuz I forgot my password and CANT write anymore.(im rinkusu) Oh well. Sorry i havent been able to comment every day because my sis takes up the computer the most of the time.
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Title: Devil's Advocate.... sorry....
Reviewed By: Ryguy5387 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2007 11:28 CDT
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Well, I opened my e-mail yesterday and saw "New Chapter for Remembering You" and I did my little happy dance! Came back a day later to open, read, and enjoy it... and got dissapointed. Now, I understand how one could get sick of InuYasha--I'm getting there myself, to tell you the truth. But, there is one thing in your A/N that I take great exception with. "Too fluffy" Are you completely insane? All pathetic, sweet tooth, happy-go-lucky comments aside, I believe this story doesn't have "too much fluff" or even much "pointless fluff". You made it painfully clear that InuYasha spent 500 years of Angst and general hell, so he would be with her again. I dunno if I'm gonna have enough room, but I'm going to cite some stuff. She closed her eyes and smiled sadly, "I know it sounds like I'm belittling everything we've been through together but it's hard not to wonder." A sob broke out from the miko, "I love you Inuyasha. I don't doubt that, but is it because of Wakahirume's feelings in her past or my feelings in the present? Did I just fall for you because you were my soul mate? Am I. . . Am I my own person anymore? Is our love even real?" Notttt fluffy! Taking in a shuddering breath she rasped out: "It's yours." He roared in anger pulling her back and slashing his claws once again, this time hitting her throat. "DON'T LIE TO ME!" Convulsing she spit out blood that was bubbling from her mouth. The innards of her throat dangling out precariously. Inuyasha shook his head. "You can't do this Kagome. You can't keep making me mad." Her hands that had been grabbing on to his shirt were now clawing at his chest. Any desperate attempt to get air back into her lungs she struggled. In a final attempt she tried breathing in but a pain shot through her lungs as nothing came in. Locking eyes with the man she loved with all her being she couldn't help the expression of betrayal cross her features. With a final jolt her body went limp within his arms and the life escaped her eyes. Scrunching his eyebrows he shook the body within his arms. "Kagome?" His whispered prayer of her name fell upon a silent room. A room that was filled with so many memories, all corrupted by a simple lie from a third party. Growling in anger at the now dead miko he set her down and swiped three more times at her abdomen. If she was dead already, he was going to be sure. Even if it was the last thing he did, he would find out who the father was. Slashes made on her delicate skin, he dipped down to take a long whiff of her now exposed entrails of her reproductive organs. His eyes widened in maniacal glee. Leaning over her to lock eyes with her dead ones he grinned, "It's mine. I'm going to be a father." Stroking her cheek he continued to smile as he repeated a mantra of hope as he gazed at her corpse. "You're mine. You can't leave me anymore. We can be together forever now. You're mine. You can't leave me anymore. We can be together forever now. You're mine. . ." You could probably pull of a chapter of all angst with Kagome possessed by Naraku, if you thought the story was so nice and happy! Still, I respect your decision, no matter how much it saddens me, and I wish you the best of luck in all endeavors until this is finished. Finally: The `him' that she had been willing to give up anything to be with. The `him' that had comforted her in her dreams, but haunted her with his absence in the day. The `him' she had been looking for. The `him' that would get rid of the emptiness she felt. The `him' that she was destined to meet again and again. Her soul mate. I single name fell from her lips as she gazed wide-eyed, "Inuyasha." That paragraph is still one of the defining images for me in InuYasha fanfiction.
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Reviewed By: Kissi21 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 19:03 CST
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I think this story is great!!!!! I am sorry that you are tired of it for the time being. I started reading it a few days agoa and i could not stop until i got to the end. Just let me know when you are going to update it. I think your style of writing is great.
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Reviewed By: DOGSDOGS On: February 07, 2007 19:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow what a cliff hanger can you put the chapters up fatser :( :)
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Reviewed By: inuyash'sHOHO On: February 02, 2007 20:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
wright in english for cayimg out loud it's so anoying(cant spell)
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Title: cool story
Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2007 18:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok i just started reading i think im on chapter 15 but im not sure um you know when you asked if anyone knew kagomes mom name it is asime i think i spelt it wrong but ill reveiw later with the way to spell it because its in on of the fanfics ive been readin but sadly enough i fogot the name of it call me a stickle head anyways i love your story and hope that you keep up the good work
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Title: head hurts
Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2007 18:26 CST
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hi i just started reading this fic and im on chap five and im so confused i hava a mega headache im so confused if you get this can you like kinda explain ummm EVerTHinG to me please and hopefuly thank youi~~!!!
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Reviewed By: Moussajinx On: November 26, 2006 12:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of THE best fanfics I've read. The story is original and you write believable scenarios and manage to stay pretty much in character with all of them. Kudoes to you and Thank You for the very enjoyable read!
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Reviewed By: Rinkusu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2006 10:50 CST
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YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Finally! Ive been waiting like forever for this! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Rinkusu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2006 13:09 CDT
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: ) Smile ppls! Its the weekend! YAYS!~
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Reviewed By: Rinkusu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2006 13:09 CDT
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: ) Smile ppls! Its the weekend! YAYS!~
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Reviewed By: Rinkusu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2006 14:59 CDT
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YAYS! Update soon, or as soon as you can...... I hould take my own advice.... :{
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Reviewed By: Rinkusu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2006 16:03 CDT
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: ) Yays! I remembered to sign today! UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: Rinkusu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2006 15:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!!!!!! Since you updated I am very happy! Yay! Oh, I forgot to review yesterday so I have to make todays Review fairly long. Anyways, how long does it normaly take you to write a chapter. I know its hard cuz Im totally on a road block with my series. Well, I was gonna update 'Never Again' since I know what the next chapters gonna be about but I forgot to save and accidentaly exited out of the screed. Anyways, This is one of my most fovouritest fan fictions in the whole world. It is very creative, unique and you always want to know whats happening next. I always like the titles you use for the chapters. One of my favourite titles was 'I know why the caged bird sings' That was a very nice name. How did you come up with it? If you have some spare time can you help me with my fan fictions? Alot of the time I just go on about things that dont make sense. Even though noone else can understand what I write I can. I like to draw alot witch makes me wonder why I haven't added a picture to my file. Oh well. I spend alot of time writing fan fictions for my site, www.anime-soup.piczo.com. I have a fan fiction place there. I dont write all the fan fictions on anime-soup. My sister also writes. Shes better at writing and drawing than me. Anyways, this sounds more like my life story *(not that id tell my life story to anyone)than a praise to your fan fiction, so I must go on with praising. Is it easy to think of chapter ideas for you, of is it easy? I Imagine it might be hard because of all the detail put into them. This fsnfiction sort of makes me think of a statue of all things Inuyasha and anime carved by Angels. This is an amazing, marvoulus fan fiction. If you've atually read this much congrats! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!, Rinkusu P.S This review took 4815 characters. ;}
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