| "Remembering You" Reviews/Comments [ 100 ] |
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Reviewed By: meera [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 15:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like reading ur fic. it is soooooo awesome! pls, write more!
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Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2003 18:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read through the 1st 6 chapters of your fanfict, and wanted to tell you that I have enjoyed it very much. I LIKE that you kept some things in Japanese (and then translated it for this gijin). You story has flowed very smoothly. You have kept track of your plot, and the side stories have melded smoothly. I am really looking forward to the next chapters, I can't wait to see what's next, and exactly what the group will be facing this time.
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Reviewed By: Aewi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2003 10:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah! Finally, I could find your story again and really enjoyed reading it. Please update soon!!! I've added your fic to my favourites, too.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: akashic_inuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2003 23:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just started reading this one... and i can say damn.... this is one of the better fics i've read. it's almost made me cry.. heh and i agree with the other people in that i love the fact that you've been using the japanese in there... me being american trying to learn japanese, that helps alot. (: good luck on the next chapter... im ready and waiting semi-patiently for it. jen
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Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2003 18:31 CDT
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Very good chapter, and Iexpecially like how kagome tries to bring back some of her memories with Miroku's line. lol very, very funny. and i guess that inuyasha and kagome's reunion just wouldn't be the same without at least one argument.
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Title: Miss
Reviewed By: Kachie-chan On: October 13, 2003 14:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I wasn't sure what to expect but oh my goodness! This is good! I love it. You are a very good writer. I love the Japanese mixed in with the english and the explinations too. Thanks. Keep writing!! I can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: Ryguy5387 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2003 14:36 CDT
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Yeah riiiight better fics. Uh-huh whatever you say... Maybe, but this is definitely my favorite. It's just too good for it not to be... (Don't people like to be flattered anymore!? SHEESH!)
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Reviewed By: Aditu On: October 10, 2003 08:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another excellent chapter...how I love it when that happens, really makes my mornings,lol. I can understand why you couldn't wait another 5 chapters to have Kagome remember, and grateful for that too ;) and you did a great job with weaving it into the story. It makes sense that she would be a little fuzzy remembering everything in all consideration, I imagine it would be like sensory overload to recall all that clearly all of a sudden. Oh and to comment on your comment to my last review (that sounds silly for some reason, lol) about the gruesome Hojo death scene; yes, it is a good thing that you did a good job describing it so...gruesomely. It shows that not only can you write nice fluffy, sad, or happy stuff, but that you are also versatile with being able to write those kind of scenes as well, some authors tend to shy away from being too descriptive in those cases. That you can be descriptive on all different types of scenarios is a good thing, that was what I intended to mean when I commented on it before, lol. So...anyway, thanks for the update, thoroughly enjoyed it and looking forward to the next when you have time to write and post. I like guessing what's going to happen next and then see if I'm right or not, lol. Best Wishes :)
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Reviewed By: Hell's lil Bitch On: September 21, 2003 06:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ur to EEeeevilll!! I Hate cliffys..I mean litterally H-A-T-E them. be nice update. onegai 'cause if u dont ill be sure to "JUMP UR 'OH' SOO EVIL ASS AN KILL IT SO DEAD IT CANT BE REINCARNATED!!! N E ways great story."> |
Reviewed By: oracle44 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2003 20:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god that was great. such an emotional rollercoaster. I was so not expecting what happened to Hojo. can't wait to sea what happens |
Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2003 16:31 CDT
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good way of getting rid of hojo, excellent story so far, and an awesome idea to have inuyasha learn all of those martial art styles, i am curioius to see how you bring those out. and just for personal reference, do you know any styles? just curious, good luck with the rest! |
Reviewed By: Aditu On: September 19, 2003 07:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for another excellent chapter! I had anticipated a really sad sob story from Kagome, and while it was sad it wasn't overly sappy and instead really made a great connection with what you have going. Did that make sense? (I need more coffee) Anyway what I really wanted to commend you on was the horror scene, well done on the gruesome carnage! Very descriptive and I easily pictured it in my mind. I love how your story is going and I can't wait to read more when you have time away from homework to write ;) That semi cliffy you left at the end there made me want to scream, lol, at least I didn't have the urge to shake Kagome again, yay. Will check in for the next chapter with eagerness! Thanks again and best wishes |
Reviewed By: ady anhee 999 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2003 03:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed reading your story and I hope you continue it. I like the twist and the whole 'Will & Grace' thing was a riot! I can not wait for the next chapter. :) |
Reviewed By: LeonRinko On: September 18, 2003 23:23 CDT
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Okay, understand that Kagome doesn't remember InuYasha because her memories of the time she spent in the past were erased when she returned to the future for the final time. But WHY did she COMPLETELY forget about her 'Touken-Oniiisan'?! She practically grew up with him in her life until InuYasha 'left' when she was 14, so she should at least remember who 'Touken-kun' is even though she can't remember who InuYasha was to her. |
Reviewed By: Ryguy5387 On: September 18, 2003 22:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The rating system only goes up to ten? Oh well... This has to be the absolute GREATEST fanfic I've ever read... I can't wait for it to be updated again! |
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