| "All That You Want Me To Be" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Ritualistic Gnared Fear and Ear Ache My Eye On: August 03, 2003 22:32 CDT
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Hello there Yemil Vagina. How aren't you doing today? I must say, I was quite unimpressed with your story of cheese on the padlock. What was up with the scene where Goku molested the inside of a beer can? You are just stupid for writing such a story! YOU CAN'T MOLEST A BEER CAN!!! And the scene where Harry Carry punched you in the pinky toe? What in the hell, man beast? I just...it makes no sense! Go shave the homosexual beer can that Goku molested and get a life!!
Yours UnPtomiacally,
Steve Hows Bong Water and Crap Gridding MotoSpakner, Death Molgumer, Shmaving Zoomblie Ctlaripiolimperter, and Boierschwileing Movstyeringtov Bearded Clambertioup Soufleir.
shmoop |
Reviewed By: leelee On: July 25, 2003 17:01 CDT
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LOL!!! Trunks is such a perv...lol. ^_~ Anyway, I have this feeling that whatever Vegeta is gonna tell his two children is going to be a complete lie just so that they will get the hint and mate with each other. LOL. I've never really cared for Trunks/Bra incest, but this is something I think I gotta read, lol.
*grins* Mirai Trunks will have a major role? *feels faint and sighs dreamily* Heheheheh...Trunks...*sighs again* ^___^ I can't wait til you get to that part! Describe him good, ok? lol. |
Reviewed By: I Luv Vege [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 00:05 CDT
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Ohh nice! Haha.. Trunks the pervert.. sure... hehe that was funny.. I have a feeling that this is going to be a really good ficcy!!!
CANT WAIT TO READ MORE!! |
Reviewed By: leelee On: July 21, 2003 18:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a marvelous start! I love it already! Though, my one concern (since I love him so much) is how Mirai Trunks comes into play...? ^^;; Anyway, the summary had me hooked, and the story itself has some really good potential! Update this really soon! I'll be looking out for it! |
Reviewed By: Zani [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 13:03 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This looks very interesting. Keep writing I want to see what you do next. I'll review again after chapter 3. |
Reviewed By: Dark Kavora On: July 21, 2003 13:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Iluv this story, its very promising. I cant wait ro see what happens between geta and goku. write again soon |
