| "Sleeping Ouji" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 08:58 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really like this story and I wished you\'d finish it. I like the rearranging of characters to suit the story line. I hope you haven\'t forgotten this story. Oh and it\'s \'Johnnyjosh\' who likes to write fairytale yaoi. He\'s one of my favorites.
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Reviewed By: candy00 On: September 03, 2003 12:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey awsome story! Poor vegeta,stupid curse! well i cant wait to hear what goes on when kakarot and vegeta meet so write again soon |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2003 16:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hm, so far so good. It's like the movie, but you've added enough extra, like all the before Vegeta is born, to the story. The thing that threw me off: ChiChi married to Bardock. Think my brain actually stalled there. lol
Continue. |
Reviewed By: Squall-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 23:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
lets get it out of the way first, i just wanted to let you know (in case you didn't do it on purpose) the correct way is North-West, South-West, South-East, and North-East--North and South should always go first. even though it's not like a huge major mistake--i just thought i'd point it out... ^_^0
now that, that's out of the way--what an outstanding and strong prologue! it was quite amazing and wonderful! i really do love the way you incorporated Sleeping Beauty of all fairytails into DBZ, you did a lovely job of it! and i can't wait for more! =^_~=
keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: arovak On: July 21, 2003 13:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey great story! i luv it. cant wait to see what happens next |
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 15:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hahaha...it's me again...I didn't quite have enough time this morning to review completely...
I thought Piccolo's counter spell was very...nice. At the start I was curiously to see the wording of that fateful gift...and the different color magic dust...very cool...!!!
I know you're very busy with TBA and other ideas...of course when the muse refuses to work...what can you do??? Hmmm...have you thought of a way to stimalate the muse....? Perhaps a raise, or a box of chocolates. Have you tried *begging*...hahahahaha!!! If it will help...I'm not to proud to *beg* for more of this fairy tale.....of course you do realize after two or three months of no update...I turn into a real pest...hahahaha!!!
By the way...I really like the pairings...King Vegeta/Bulma, Bardock/Chichi and of course Vegeta/Kakarot...*bat's eyes*
Evil!!! Evil, I say... Why...? Frieza should have know he wouldn't get an invitation...in fact I bet he did know...just EVIL... And the poor dragons...you know the King will have them all hunted down and disposed of...so sad...I don't believe the curse said anything about the horn being on a live dragon..."on the horn of a dragon"...nope nothing about the dragon being alive...hahahaha!!! Sorry, one of those odd moments...
I'm most anxious to see how the young prince turns out...!!!! I'm also curious to know if Kakarotts sticks to Vegeta like glue over the next 15 years or do they more less go their own way...until that fateful day Kakarott discovers the handsome sleeping prince...???
Waiting.............................................................BRILLENT....................................................................... |
