Reviewed By: Yami Kitsune56 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2003 12:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok...this story is really good, the only problem I see is its hard to stay focused on the story because all the stuff is clumped togeather. All you have to do is learn to space it a little better ^_^ but don't worry about it, I used to do the same thing. It really is a good story. I hope to read more soon ^_^ |
