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| "Becoming Spring" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2008 21:24 CST
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this was such a good, yet sad story. unlike keisha i dont think haru is the bad guy, if anything it's kisa she should have talked to hiro about how she felt. I feel sorry for haru he loves kisa, but kisa is staying with hiro. everything will work out for kisa and hiro, but when does haru get someone who will stay with him? if you write a sequel please let haru get someone.
| Reviewed By: foamyfan15010 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2005 22:25 CDT
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Very well written, and sweet. And sad. lol I love how passionate your little stories are even though they're kind of explicit. :o) Awesome job.
| Reviewed By: Keisha On: August 22, 2003 16:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story. I still can't imagine why. But, it had all my favorite characters in it. I love Hiro, and i love the way Kisa and him are together. It was so cute (and likely) that they were going to get married. I love Hatsuharu (he's a sexy beast! ^__^) and i knew that having him in the story would make it even more passionate! LOL! But, at the end, i was mostly supporting Hiro (and his choice). I felt bad for Kisa also, and i felt like Hatsuharu was the bad guy... i mean, the story was wonderful. I was even really sad at the end, when Hiro took back the engagement ring gave Kisa the promise ring. All in all it was a great, passionate (albeit immoral... ^-^) story! great job! | Reviewed By: Riltani On: July 23, 2003 08:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this was fantastic! Bloody Brilliant! I love Hiro/Kisa and thought I'd hate this love triangle thingy, but you have totally bowled me over! Great story!!! |
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