| "Difference between Wanting and Needing" Reviews/Comments [ 44 ] |
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Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon *not signed in* On: April 14, 2004 04:46 CDT
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hey, just saw this story and decided to read it. i love it so far. it's so interesting. I hope that there's a spark soon. i love sparks. lol Did Kags dad leave her mom for Kik's mom? i wonder, or did he just leave her for kikyo? creepy thought there huh? well update asap. i can't wait. keep up the good work. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: akashic_inuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2004 21:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm pretty happy with the way this is turning out. its very good... heh, me being the hopeless romatic is wanting to see the liking each other bit.
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2004 08:21 CDT
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It's a kewl story, I like it. Kagome's a bit of a player though. And did you know that the suffix 'sama' means lord, or boss, or just a very very formal way of saying Mr or Ms? I don't think that it's normal for Kagome to be calling him 'Lord InuYasha' thats kinda what Myoga did in the actual "InuYasha". And the suffix 'chan' is too friendly for InuYasha to say 'Kagome-chan' if they don't really know eachother. Sorry if I'm being a Japanese know-it-all, I'm just lettin ya know. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: kitsunefirelover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2003 21:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon plz! I'am scared of Precious she reviews to much...way to much.
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Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2003 22:13 CDT
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I'd offer a constructive crit, but my brain is functioning at 1% right now. I like the fact that you have given us a bit of insight on Inuyasha. Before, I was unsure of his personality in this. Now, before I say something idiotic, I'll submit this. |
Reviewed By: Nate Grey (2lazy2login) On: September 08, 2003 14:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The high school setting is interesting, but I was a little confused when I read about Kagome's scar. Is this supposed to be taking place after the anime, or instead of it, like an AU? I wasn't sure, but it seemed like you were hinting that scar was where the Shikon Jewel emerged from...
Other than that, I like it so far. |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2003 09:52 CDT
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Hello Media Miner! I'm back!
Well I must say that I didn't think that anybody would have the guts to make Kagome a person that isn't "pure" as well as secretive from the ones close to her. I find it very interesting. Maybe the girl that can get anyone will finally hit her road block.
And I didn't think that Kagome was a slut. She clearly states that she is looking for someone to make her feel complete. This is her way of taking them out for a "test drive", sorta speak. You can make InuYasha a human if you want. Making him a hanyou might make things difficult because he could smell her activities, ne? (Since we are on this topic which was Koga? Or is he no longer important to this story?)
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Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2003 17:01 CDT
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I probably wouldn't have read this, but I saw your link in the "Please Read!" post in the forums. I do like this, except my thoughts on Kagome were a bit different from how you explained her behavior...it seemed to me that it was more like she was searching for what she wants, not knowing what she wants ^^ But, I do like the way you depict her...very unique personality, and interesting. The small details...such as her habit of taking an item from each guy she's with...are nice touches to this. I look forward to more of this, which could be something of a miracle since I usually dislike the school related fics ^^ |
Reviewed By: freakyanime On: August 30, 2003 12:28 CDT
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Well, sorry but in the prologue you did sort of made her a slut but you did change that after you wrote the first chapter. |
Reviewed By: jubyo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2003 12:00 CDT
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Please make nu a hanyou!!!!! That would be soooo kewl! I think that he is hotter as a hanyou and would be a perfect match for Kag in this story as a hanyou!!~_+ |
Reviewed By: jubyo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2003 11:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story! Very interesting! PLease upodate asap!!! |
Reviewed By: DarkRyuAi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2003 20:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, love the story. I agree with you on the whole, Kago isn't a slut, she's just knows what she wants thing. Would you pronounce Naraku's last name the same way you pronounce "Leo" in English? j/w. Ya, I did notice that you weren't mentioning whether or not everyone is human, hanyou, or demon, but I just figured that they were all human because the way this story is set up. Then again, you did mention Kago's scar on her left side, but NOT how she got it. You sly dog, you. Anyway, love the story. Can't wait for hte second chappie. Is there an alert thingie on this site that will alert me when you update? I'm not sure cause I'm new, that's all. If not, when you update, can you e-mail and tell me at QTCyberChic86@aol.com. Thanks a bunch. Can't wait for you 2 update. Sayonara for now!
-DarkPyro
P.S. I was readin the other reviews, and I guess it would be cool if Inu was a hanyou. But it should be either that he doesn't know he is(nah! not original enough!) or that he is under a cloakng spell thingy. It would be also kinda neat if he ws similar to Kago, that he "know what he wants", if ya know what I mean. Or, you could make him a NORMAL person. Whateva floats your boat. You're a great author and I'll like it wither way. |
Reviewed By: Lisa On: August 21, 2003 11:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This idea is really good! I like how you switched it around, the girl instead of the guy
doing those quick relationships. |
Reviewed By: Fire-Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2003 16:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Plz Update Soon! I love your story! |
Reviewed By: Critic On: August 21, 2003 16:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok i read ur author's note and i totally dont get how u dont see kagome as a slut in ur fic. its actually a really good fic but she DOES seem like a slut. sleepin wit a diff guy every weekend?! thas fucked up dont u think?! yea yea shes OOC but too OOC. and she thinks its alright to sleep wit diff guys whenever she wants?! wut is it she wants from these guys?! it aint love! she should kno that already!! shes just fuckin em and walkin out. messed up shit if u ask me (but ur not askin) o well update soon. |
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