| "Difference between Wanting and Needing" Reviews/Comments [ 44 ] |
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Reviewed By: divine_buttrfly [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2003 00:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
my dog pushedthe submit button out of anger and the need to go potty.
by the way your story is relly cool and different |
Reviewed By: divine_buttrfly [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2003 00:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Make Inuyasha a Hanyou pleeze.
By the way |
Reviewed By: freakyanime On: July 26, 2003 13:39 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the way you made Kagome a little slutly there go's her innocence, anyway make Inuyasha a Hanyou. |
Reviewed By: AnkukoTenma On: July 25, 2003 01:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
Make Inyasha both!! Like in day time he is human but at night he is hanyou! And that would make him more secretive hehe~.^ Plus he wouldn't smell her in the day time but only at night and when he changes on the New Moon he is full human but on the Full Moon he is full hanyou or demon dosent't really matter to me just as long the ears are there ^.~! I wouldn't really care just as long as you keep on going with it!! ^.^(just an idea) |
Reviewed By: WaterGoddess On: July 23, 2003 19:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
Doggie**** ^_^' |
Reviewed By: WaterGoddess On: July 23, 2003 19:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Doggie**** ^_^' |
Reviewed By: WaterGoddess On: July 23, 2003 19:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
i think Inu Yasha should be a hanyou!!! yeah baby!! sry, but he is just so cute with the boggie ears!! ^_^ Kawaii!!! |
Reviewed By: Bsasami153 On: July 22, 2003 12:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Make InuYasha a Hanyou because he's mostly a hanyou. |
Reviewed By: #_# On: July 22, 2003 08:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Make Inuyasha a Hanyou Please |
Reviewed By: #_# On: July 22, 2003 08:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good so far.As for your question on Make Inuyasha a Hanyou |
Reviewed By: Spikesfangirl On: July 21, 2003 22:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the idea, can't wait to read more. The beginning is drawing-- and makes you want to find out more about Kagome (since she is simply a character whom you have taken the name of and built up yourself) Keep going! It's great |
Reviewed By: Holla @ a Playa! On: July 21, 2003 20:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i think u should keep goin wit this fic but i dont really like tha fact that u made kagome a whore. "...she should tell him wut she wants..." WTF is that?!?! she wants sex?!?! why!? why is she a slut??!?! anyways...thas tha only thing i didnt like about ur fic cuz kagome is NOT,i repeat, NOT a slut or whore!! >.< |
Reviewed By: Llorona [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 18:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
I've enjoyed it so far - you should keep going! :) |
Reviewed By: ChUNky LuVeR [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow kagomes a whore?! who would have thought that! You should make inu-yasha a hanyou he's much cuter with the doggy ears ^.~ |
Reviewed By: unknown On: July 22, 2003 18:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think you should make inuyasha a hanyou since you said hes mysterious and all, it will make since if you do that, GREAT STORY BY THE WAY |
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