| "To Love and Protect" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Kagome_Sango_InuYasha_shashomaru [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2008 21:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was so terrible for Kagome and I just so very srry for her I hope Naroku gets beaten up very baddly to pay for what he did to Kagome please update soon cant wait to see how it turns out and see Naroku get the beating of his life.
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Reviewed By: Belle ange [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2008 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story absolutle broke my heart! My best friend was raped several years ago and has just recently reached the point where she could talk about it freely. Kagome's reaction to this was so unique but so accurate that it brought me back to when she was explaining it to me. I nearly cried during that scene and now I just hope that Inuyasha can help put her back together like my friends fiance. This is an amazing portrayal and so well writen that I feel it to the very depths of my heart. Again, this is why I am such a fan of yours. please, please continue, even if it's just one last chapter. i have to see Inuyasha get revenge.
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Reviewed By: BrokenAngel1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2007 21:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very deep. not alot of people are able to write about such a topic, let alone do it well, but you pulled it off. can't wait 4 an update. great job so far.
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2007 19:41 CST
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Lots of powerful stuff. My only wonder about how Kagome reacts is her accusing InuYasha for not trying to save her, when his leaving was because he heard stuff and he went to find out what was going on...He was on her trail when he finds her...but again, with all the trauma of how Naraku used her and then used her to rip up Inu, her feeling of being used/abandoned and (and possibly even being manipulated emotionally on top of things by Naraku, although you haven't said that's the case, it would be in his style) certainly could be her reaction. [she does have a tendency to excuse Inu and let self-doubt about her worth come in, but she was never exactly put in this situation in the manga]. Inu beating himself up is so true - but I wondered about him staying away so far. Expected him to stay out of sight though. Maybe with the demonic episode he didn't know what the heck to do. I surely wouldn't. I love the way you paint Sango. So often she's portrayed too overprotective. Inu telling Kagome she loved him to bring her back from the demon is such a good contrast to Kagome saving Inu from Kaguya in the second movie...but with this type of damage, it's going to be a hard, painful road ahead. And what will happen to the Inutachi as a group? The group dynamics will be forever changed. I look forward to seeing how you progress with this.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2007 13:03 CST
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just letting you know, i get nightmares after i watch 'empire strikes back', i can't even watch 'little mermaid' or 'beauty and the beast' without crying and palpitations and i know they all have happy endings. my friends know not to watch horror/angst/suspense with me there or they have to deal with a traumatized ginny. . . i'm shaking here and i skipped the really traumatic stuff... i am going to have to read some fluffy/comedy to counteract everything. . . it's a good story and i will probably continue reading it as you update but roxanne, please warn me if the ending is not a happy one so i know to stop? ~ thanks a bunch, ginny ~ a long long time ago in a galaxy far far away i took my 5 year old niece (she's 33 now) to a haunted house (under protest). i was tripping (yeah i was an acid head) and i freaked, picked her up like a football, kicked some costumed guy in the nuts and ran out screaming "i'll save you, i won't let them get you!!"
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 20:51 CDT
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ouch... Kagome's words were harsh man. That would really, really suck to be screwing your g/f and have her turn into a demon. But, still... good story.
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Reviewed By: tsujita_91 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 23:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i suck at writing reviews. but i do like the story.
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Reviewed By: inugirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2003 20:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like! you should continue it, i love the dark fics! |
Reviewed By: Lady of the Western Lands On: July 22, 2003 23:02 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
good story. I like dark fanfiction and this wasn't a big dark one but it is good non the less. wait....did I just say something good to a human?....SESSHY!! HELP ME I'M GOING SOFT!!! |
Reviewed By: Soudesuka_Shurikens On: July 22, 2003 00:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
naraku that insensative bastard.
yet so devious and beautiful in
many ways than one. naraku is like
a leader i would follow and respect
his idealogies. yet at the same time
feeling no remorse if he were to die. or
'be punsished'...this is one interesting story. keep updating and keep on trucking. |
Reviewed By: little_bit_of_faith16 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 22:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kinda dark of course, but still a good and very interesting fic that I would like to see continued. So please update soon! |
Reviewed By: AsianEyes [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 18:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wowness...that was...beautiful.
Sorrie, i'm such a hentai.
good job, and pretty original. |
