| "CHECKMATE: A Spiders Beauty" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: Emotinal, which means good
Reviewed By: Island Sweetheart [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2003 21:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's very expressive. Very deep, which I like. It depicts what some authors forget. You brought emotion to the words, even if in simple words, you've kept that human treasure endowed in your story. So in other words, I liked it. Love it, actually. Keep going because it's great!
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Reviewed By: Calinda [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2003 18:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's wonderful please keep writing the story I can't wait to read the rest of it. |
Reviewed By: Chenna On: July 23, 2003 13:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wonderful story this is one of the best Trigun fics that I've read in a long time. Keep up the great work! |
Reviewed By: Gita [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 20:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
I saw this on FF.net before, but figured Iwould review here as well. I had never considered the combination of MillyXKnives before reading your story, but thought it was an interesting combination. You portray Knives with enough confusion and self-revulsion to make his feelings for Milly seem not OOC. I wonder how Vash will stop him this time? Please Keep it up. |
