"My Heart Forever Yearning" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 14:12 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Please update. I really like this and I hope you continue this story
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Title: Don't Speak Reviewed By: SexaySaiyajin2004 On: January 18, 2004 17:40 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I've read all of your fic's,you haven't updated in quite a while.I hope you'll update this fic and your others soon.
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Reviewed By: XZanayu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2003 22:40 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: What a great chapter!! I'm glad that Piccolo and Gohan feel the same way about each other! That's wonderful!!! Hurry with the next one!! |
Reviewed By: Sinu-Yasha On: July 24, 2003 21:46 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i lov it but i have to admitt the piccolo/ gohon seen felt alittle odd to me. but overall i enjoyed the fic, update soon. |
Reviewed By: XZanayu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 21:03 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I hope that Gohan comes to his senses and goes to see Piccolo about how he feels about his father abandoning him and his family. He and Piccolo share so much, they need each other.
Has Vegeta left Bulma? If so, is it because of Goku? Hurry with the next chapter!!! |
Reviewed By: rebel On: July 22, 2003 12:16 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hey I luv this story! its so sad,evryone, even geta misses goku. I luv it. I cant wait until goku comes back to commfort our little prince! write more soon |