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| "Sips of Blood" Reviews/Comments [ 82 ] | | Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 › » ] | Reviewed By: Mad_as_a_hatter On: December 31, 2003 10:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story please stay at this site!!! don't let that loser girl upset you. i love you story!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Maliksgirl1125 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2003 14:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Konichiwa!! I read the whole story over again and for some very odd reason, I don't see why I ever flamed you. ^_^; Ja ne!
| Reviewed By: Amane On: December 30, 2003 13:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well now... o_o I must have had a weird ass day when I wrote all of that. *blinks* Good to know I didn´t offend anyone too bad. >_>;; I just hope that everyone will make an effort to get along from now on. ^_^ ...and I´m still looking forward to a new chapter. *nodnod*
| Reviewed By: Maliksgirl1125 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2003 11:51 CST
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Oh, did I mention my sister still hates you? ^_^;
| Reviewed By: Maliksgirl1125 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2003 11:34 CST
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Hey, I didn't say you won, I just said I'd stop being an ass.
| Reviewed By: Ryoko-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 13:23 CST
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Well Malik's Girl, if you truly want to dedicate a fic to me, I have to see your writing skills (grammer, spelling, and the like). And I do not forgive for turning a review board into a flame war (it's a review board, for fuck's sake, not a message board). And to everyone else: YEA! We have won the war...
| Title: To everyone else
Reviewed By: Maliksgirl1125 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 11:41 CST
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I'm sorry you all hate me and I'm sorry I made your lives hell. Can't say much more now because I have to get off the internet. With all due respect, Maliksgirl1125
| Title: To Ryoko- chan
Reviewed By: Maliksgirl1125 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 11:39 CST
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Okay scince I was being a major ass, bitch, bastard, and many other things, I'm here to say I'm sorry. I know it may be too late to apoligise, but even though I KNOW you won't forgive me, I have to apoligize. I'm sorry that I was saying that I own Malik, Marik, and Bakura when they rightfully belong to Kazuki Takahashi. I also have to tell you that I truly did love the story. Unfortunately, I'm a hentai and Yaoi reader and even though Marik was part of the Yaoi, I did love the story. I know I've pissed you off more than anybody else on the planet, so to make it up to you, I will if you wish dedicate a fic to you. I won't reveiw your stories like I did this one. If I do hate a story of yours I will come right out and tell you. I won't be a bitch anymore and scince I was being a bitch, I allow you to completely hate me. With all due respect, Maliksgirl1125
| Reviewed By: Maliksgirl1125 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 11:12 CST
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Amane said everything I wanted to hear in ONE reveiw. Why I wanted to hear it? Well because I am a little shithead who likes to see people get angry. Now if you please ecuse me, I have one more reveiw to write...
| Title: To Amane
Reviewed By: Maliksgirl1125 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 11:06 CST
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FINNALLY! Somebody says what I want to hear! I don't know if you all are really stupid or what but Amane clearly isn't.
| Reviewed By: Hobbit Dweller On: December 29, 2003 00:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say that this is one of the best fanfics I have ever read...and it is very sad and disapointing that the reviewboard has basically turned into a war zone. If you have something to say about the fic...then say it, but if you really hate it that much...then the most logical...AND SMART thing to do is stop reading it...hell...I'm a total ditz and even I managed to figure that one out. Ryoko-chan, I commend you for putting up with everything and I really hope you'll continue this story for the more mature people out there that respect the fact that over 1 million people in the world probably watch this show so claiming one person to yourself probably isn't a good idea unless you enjoy have lots of enemies... anywho, I've spoken my word and I really really really hope you update this story because it is awesome Hobbit Dweller
| Reviewed By: Ryoko-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2003 23:53 CST
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Malik's Girl... I have notice you have no e-mail or AIM or whatever listed? Are you that much of a wuss? And have you read my note? I doubt it you little shit. You morbidly obese little shit. I want to fucking wring your neck and hear you beg for me to release you and let you live. If you were really immortal, I know you would not scream and beg to live. You lie you little shit. I don't like people acting as if they are above me. You should start reading long paragraphs and notes, you find messages in them. That is amazing, isn't it? And if I ruled the world, I'd torture you and never let you die. I have to end this now becuase I have mean parents, but I shall be back.
| Title: Ryoko-chan, you're and awesome writer, and flamers, get a life you losers!
Reviewed By: Akumu Megami On: December 28, 2003 23:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ryoko-chan,I'd like to say that I am very pleased that you re-posted Sips Of Blood. And I'd also like to say that this is of the best 10 Yaoi stories I've ever read! ^^ You're writing is wonderful, and you're really good at describing things, and the plot and all that is totally awesome. But, I must ask you, please keep posting on MM.org, because sadly, some people can't go to AFF.net. Any way, great work!!!!! Keep it up!!!! And, a bit of a Request/Challege, do you think you could write a Yami Malik/Ryou ficcie? I love that pairing more than anything, and it's really hard to find fics for that pairing. Do you think you could write one? To Malik's Girl or whatever name she goes by at the moment, I don't really care... You really need to get a life, seriously. Malik and Marik, they are cartoons, as sad as it is. And, if they were alive, they wouldn't waste their time with love and relationships, and they especially wouldn't waste their time with an obssesed moronic fan girl like you. A. They're heartless bastards, and nobody can really argue with that. They'd kill you within stepping 3 feet of them. B. It's not in their character make-up to love somebody. They exist to be fictional villians you moron. About the you having a Mill. Rod replica. Who gives a shit? So you have a big metal stick that's painted gold and has fancy designs on it, who cares? What does it matter? Why do you even bring it up, nobody cares. Man, get a life. About looking death in the eye. Whoop-ity-doo. Everybody looks death in the eye at some point, and it doesn't mean a thing. At most, it makes you learn a lesson so you don't repeat a stupid mistake. It doesn't make you immortal, because,if it did, I'd be immortal many times over you dip-shit. And just because you've looked death in the eye, it makes you no more deserving of the completely fictional love of two murderous and insane cartoon characters. Why do you even review if all you're going to do is insult someone who writes better than you ever could? Cripes it's pathetic when somebody flames and excellent writer, telling them that they suck mind you, when they have no room to talk about having to talent in the writing department. I've read some of your sruff honey, and lemme tell you, you have no room to tell Ryoko-chan that her writing sucks. Just because it's your opinion doesn't make it fact, but you seem to have a hard time accepting that. As I've said, it's pathetic. Nobody likes you here, and of all the positive rviews here, you polute the whole story and positive feed back with your incesant bitching. Get a life you moron. It doesn't really matter if you hate the story. Just because you don't like the story doesn't mean Ryoko-chan should stop writing, or bend it to your will you idiot. And, a for having the same likes and dis-likes as Malik and Marik.... A. If you liked to murder people, you'd be dead by now. People are pretty serious with the death penalty these days ya know, and liking to murder little children a old people wouldn't help you in the least. B. You want to take over th world? Pft, don't make me laugh. Somebody of your 'great' stature couldn't even take over a drive-in resturant. C. The liking of blood. WEll, you idiot, everybody has to like blood to some point. Number one, it keeps you alive, and number two, you can't not appriciate it to some extense. D. If you really had a yami, you'd be in a pyschiatric ward right now. I'm surprised that your not in one right now you loony. If you were, we wouldn't have the problem of you and your dumbass flaming shit. E. So who cares if your a 'perfect and loving fan of Malik and Marik'? I'm a fan of them too, but do I go around and claim to own them? No. In fact, somebody does own them you idiot. Kazuki Takahashi owns all credit to anything Yu-Gi-Oh related, Malik, Marik, Ryou and Bakura included. I wonder if I smell a law suit for stealing. All in all, maybe we should just see if we can report you. You're simply a waste of time, and you don'tt deserve Ryoko-chan's attention.(I hope you realize that Ryoko-chan! ^^)Get a life, and please, if you want to say something to me, don'y beat around the bush. Try and use your stupid simple minded brain to think of something some-what intelligent to say back. *smrik* I know it's hard, but I'm hopeful that you have even anough intelligence to do that much. To all who is on Ryoko-chan's side and loves this fic.... Ya know, with all the Malik-what's-her-name hater here, we could make a club. ^^ Tee Hee, once again, GREAT JOB Ryoko-chan, keep it up! And I hope you liked my little note to you, Malik's Girl no baka! Toodles you idiotic Kisama, Kutabare too! >:D Akumu Megami p.s. And if you don't know what Kisama and Kutabare mean, I'm sure somebody would love to help you out.
| Title: fun with flames
Reviewed By: Ladyhellharpy On: December 28, 2003 18:44 CST
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i love the story. it looks like you are an anne rice fan as well. cool ;) i love the way the story is developing. also just for a sugestion... for the flames. put them into a big pile and make a bon fire, and dance naked under the full moon O.O *cough cough* well any ways keep wrighting and have fun with the flames ;) LadyHellHarpy
| Reviewed By: Amane On: December 28, 2003 07:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story, absolute freaking love it! ^_^ One of my fave parts was when Ryou finally made an appearance, thank heavens that he´s got a nice Mistress. ~_~ *glomps* Love you for that! ...even though I´m a rabid fan of torturing bishies. >_>;; The angstyness in the first chapter was devine, I soaked it up like a day in the sun. ^___^ I almost feel sorry for Malik´s Girl. o_o Almost. Is her life really so sad that she has to make up all of...this? *points to all the ludicrous things being displayed in her "reviews"* Also, does she have sticky shift key or what? o_O;; About the coma thing...do we laugh or cry? If she was in a coma then how did she suddenly wake up and get well enough to flame on here? ~_~ First thing that came to mind when I read about her claiming to have the same birth date as Malik and Bakura, was : 'Does she -really- know that they´re just fictional and everything about them is made up?' I, too, can make up some gorgeous bishounen and make sure they have the same birth date and blood type as me. It does by no means mean that we´re "meant for each other". Btw, how old is this girl? She´s clearly acting like a deranged teenybopper. Oh, and what´s this with having to be immortal to "deserve" Malik/Marik? So she almost died two times...big deal! I´ve almost died 5 times (2 near drownings, 3 car accidents; no comas, but with the whole resuscitation attempts 3 times) does that make -me- even more entitled to them? *smirks* Alrighty then... Give it up, dear, they´re f-i-c-t-i-o-n-a-l characters, you have no future with them.
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