| "Sips of Blood" Reviews/Comments [ 82 ] |
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Reviewed By: Malik's Girl On: July 22, 2003 14:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay first off I'm a girl and I want to have sex with Malik. In your story I don't like the fact that you made Malik seen gay, but I do like that Yugi's finally getting what he deserves. Keep writing I'm a Hentai Sucker so if it's Hentai I read it. |
Reviewed By: Nicky On: July 22, 2003 14:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Yugi! This is a good story so far. keep it going |
Reviewed By: Nicky On: July 22, 2003 14:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Poor Yugi! This is a good story so far. keep it going |
Reviewed By: malik&mariks girl! :) On: July 28, 2003 13:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
oh ya maliks girl i hope u know malik doesnt really have a yami he is just a skitzo cuz all he had to go through as a kid and the millineum rod just released his other personality! kk buh bye |
Reviewed By: Malik Chibi On: August 24, 2003 15:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nya hahaha. You rock at this. Really. This is, in my history of Yaoi fanfic reading, the best one I've ever read. XD Woo!! Rock on Ryoko!! And on Malik's coma Girl, gawd, i thought I was sad... Flamers suck. Why do you read what clearly pisses you off. I have no pity. Ryoko is doing a really good job, and probably doesn't care what you say, so go Worship at your little Malik shrine and leave the goddess of Yaoi fanfics do her work. Yes, I have no soul, it got stuck in the toaster when I was on holiday where I lost my sanity shortly afterwards. Anyway back to the fanfic.. Ryoko, I see you fixed the -san/-sama thing. Yay. But I still can't work out from the fic, if Yuugi remembers the others or not. In the last chp, he dreamed of Anzu , but did not sseem to recognise her when she was in front of him. If you have no real logic for this it's okay, but I was still wondering |
Reviewed By: Malik's Girl On: July 25, 2003 15:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
WHAT!!?!?!?!?!?! MALIK AND HIS YAMI ARE NOT YOURS! THEY ARE MINE!?!?! I KNOW EVERYTHING ABOUT MALIK AND HIS YAMI! YOU KNOW NOTHING! HE WOULD NEVER LOVE A MORTAL! DO YOU WANT TO KNOW WHAT MAKES YOU A MORTAL?!!?!!?!?!!?!?! YOU HAVE NEVER LOKKED DEATH IN THE EYE! UNLESS YOU WERE ONCE ALMOST KILLED, YOU ARE A DISGUSTING MORTAL WHO DESERVES TO DIE BY MY HAND! IF YOU OR ANY OTHER MORTAL TOUCHES MALIK OR HIS YAMI, THE CONSEQUECE WILL BE DEATH! |
Reviewed By: Son Cara [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 18:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
Okay, but where's Yami? Please in the next chapter, put everthing you said in it, adn Yami. Please, Please please!!! Yugi has to remember his yami!! |
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