| "ErOtIc KuRaMa" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Hanami On: March 26, 2004 19:13 CST
Comment/Review:
Very funny! Continue soon! ^___^ Please don't make it a yaoi!
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Reviewed By: Yuki1000 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2003 20:35 CST
Comment/Review:
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA(FALLS OFF CHAIR) (GETS UP) SORRY ABOUT THAT FUNNY SO PLEASE UPDATE
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Reviewed By: Reia Moon On: September 25, 2003 18:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
ok you need to update the story it's been almost 2 mounts
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Reviewed By: midnitedreams On: August 09, 2003 13:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like what you're writing. Keep it up. I can't believe you made Hiei dress like Britney Spears! That was so funny! *laughing so hard that i fell out of my chair* Ouch my head. N e ways, please don't make this a yaoi fic. There's already enough of those -_-. |
Reviewed By: MIMICHAN On: August 04, 2003 15:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yoai YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!But please don't be mean to Hiei no more.Please. |
Reviewed By: TheDefinitionOfDarkness On: July 28, 2003 15:33 CDT
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Poor Hiei! How could you turn him into that slut?! I can't stand Britney. She's so....so....*Cringes* Ewwww....bad mental image of Hiei with blond hair. Why did you make MY Kurama cross-dress? *Sigh* Pretty good, but could have been better. Kurama is too much of a loud-mouth in here. Don't make it a yaoi. |
Reviewed By: The Red Witch On: July 27, 2003 23:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey look i've read alot of fan fics and this is really bad. i the begining was good but hiei singing is stupid and kurama cross dressing sucks. take out those parts and the story is really good.keep writing maybe you'll chang it a bit. good luck |
Reviewed By: AnimeAngel007 On: July 27, 2003 15:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ha Ha....That was funny. Please do not make it a yaoi fic. I'd rather have something funny and hilarious happen. Still can't think of anything funny to torture Hiei with... Let's see...you could put him in a dress. But thats too original. Oh well. Just make it funny^.^ |
Reviewed By: Rose Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2003 06:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
That was funny and good. There are too many Yaoi of Kurama and Hiei. I can't wait to see what happens next! |
