| "Confessions Of A Believer" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 22:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
^_^
That was very well done! Most self insertions tend to get overly long (as Chibi Gemi has said) and eventually become boring. But this... this was wonderful!
I really liked how you incorporated the anime convention in to it... question though... who's the chick that was hanging out with Piccolo?
The Lemon was AWESOME, btw... *smirk* Thank you for not making it sound cheezy, or sleazy for that matter. Very well done *salutes*
Well, I'm off to read your sequal story!
Toodles! |
Reviewed By: Chibi Gemi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 22:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really good, I liked it. ^_^
It's nice to see a well written self insert. It's nice to get away from all the really long epics and things of that sort.
Enough rambling. I really liked your story and it'd be great to see more of the like. (can you tell i suck at reviews? lol)
May the fanfiction muses shower you with luck and inspiration!
Later DAyz & TAnx!! ^_^
-Chibi Gemi |
