| "Tonight And The Rest Of My Life" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: Kawaii
Reviewed By: HappyDragon(loged out) On: June 30, 2004 19:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good, but for future reference the / or \ and the// or \\ are usually used by other writers to show talking through the mind link. Usually the single is the hikari and the double is the yami. As for showing the song lyrics, well that's up to you. I think I've seen people bold it, italicize it, put ~ before and after it, and a few other things. But that's up to you, and this is still sweet, more along Shounen-ai (boy love) than yaoi (male on male sex), but that's beside the point. Good luck on future fics.
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Reviewed By: Lil Sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2004 11:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cuuuuute
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Reviewed By: JBabe On: January 03, 2004 15:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww, this was sweet and cute ^-^
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Reviewed By: Millenia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 10:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
I agree very sweet. |
Reviewed By: ilpalazzo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 23:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very sweet. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Sana On: July 22, 2003 22:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was such a cute fanfic story. YAMI AND YUGI 4 EVER! I think you should continue this story, like mak a sequal or somefin. I really enjoyed it. |
