| "True feelings" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: babygurl_tiff On: August 16, 2005 04:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
aWww...why'd u st0p??? PLEASE continue...PLEASE!!!
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Reviewed By: NekaPrncss12 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 17:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great!Update faster so we can read the rest cuz it was really good. ill be lookin for more!
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Title: True Feelings
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 00:07 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: inumoon3 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 15:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update, faster and you better keep your word. I think you should have Pan get pregnant while Trunks' is still married to Marron and then Marron should also be pregnant but not for Trunks. I think you should at least have Trunks and Marron fuck once so at least we may think the baby is either Roberto or Trunks. Well anyway your story. TTFN~ Ta Ta For Now
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Reviewed By: inumoon3 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 17:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pan and Trunks forever!!!
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Title: I hate Marron
Reviewed By: MeLL On: November 24, 2003 11:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe Marron! what'd she expect was going to happen in a dark alley while doing that to herself! dende i hate her! goten can't love her! yuck! poor Goten! can't pan go into that r.o.s.a.t so she could atleast be 17 when she comes out?
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