| "Candy and Guns" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: LPGurl (2lazy2login) [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2006 00:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is so cool!! I totally look forward to GW and YnM crossovers! I hope you can update this though I'd love it if you made the next chapters longer please! Looking forward to it. Jaa!
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Reviewed By: dk_joy not signed in On: July 15, 2005 10:04 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
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I'm interested - please keep going! I like crossovers with GW. This should be fun...
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Reviewed By: Deli-Chan On: June 30, 2005 04:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, there is only one chapter. If you post more chapters, I can say more about this story. What can I say about this chapter? Well, it's a good beginning. It'd be a great story, so write, write and write!
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Reviewed By: Sekiseishi On: March 30, 2005 21:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I guess I'm the latest reviewer. *looks around* I am. I really like it, though! Plz write more!
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Title: Excellent
Reviewed By: Karasunaki17 On: August 24, 2004 07:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Quit leaving me hanging! Please?
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Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 18:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
looks like a fun cross over! more to come?
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Reviewed By: princess_forever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2004 20:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey I really like your story. can't wait to read what happenes next.
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Reviewed By: ItsSadYouSuck [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 13:56 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I loved it but you dint wright any more, Crys*
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Reviewed By: Aki Rei On: January 23, 2004 03:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
it started out well... and you certainly raised my curiosity... please do continue!! me love lemons!! >.< and oooh... what pairings do you have in mind?!
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Reviewed By: Rainsh On: October 17, 2003 05:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey that was great please contiune I really really really want to know what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Dragon Slayer1 On: September 09, 2003 07:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey that was great please contiune i would like to know what happens next. Add more to your chapters it would make them much more intresting. |
Reviewed By: bandit-gurl On: September 04, 2003 17:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
XDD i want more!!! yaoi lemon!!! |
Reviewed By: Googuru no Shoujo On: July 30, 2003 22:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did an all out okay job, but you made most of the paragraphs one sentances. I would rather see 3 or four sentances grouped together. It looks better.
Well, that was rather short. Maybe you could make the next chapter longer. I know I would rather read longer chapters. I hate when things end this abruptly!
Anyway, like I said, this was very good. And I would like to read more, so please update soon. |
Reviewed By: garnet eyes [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 18:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It flows well and is spaced nicely so that my eyes don't hurt as I read it. The only real thing to look for that I see is a slight propensity toward making all your sentences into one long one.
Overall, I'd say that this fic is starting out to end up beautifully written. |
