| "The Parting of the Ways" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: 3
Reviewed By: TLR On: December 19, 2008 11:10 CST
Comment/Review:
So far it's decently qritte. You said that this fic will be Kenshin/Kaoru later on. Does it mean that it's one of those fics where Kenshin breaks up with Tomoe and leaves her for Kaoru? Hopefully not, because I think it's a pretty horrid concept; Tomoe doesn't deserve such a fate, plus Kenshin, knowing his upright, caring nature would never do such a thing; moreover he would never have seen another woman in a romantic light if Tomoe were alive. Here, I'd expect him to see Kaoru as a younger sister type, since she is 11 years younger than him and he doesn't have that immature 'oro' personality to match hers. If you still intend to replace Tomoe with Kaoru as his love interest, I hope you kill her off instead of dumping her and give a suitable time gap for him to get over her. An idea: include a part about Tomoe's excellent Edo-mae cooking. She can cook breakfast at the dojo instead of Kenshin.
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Title: Good
Reviewed By: GG On: November 28, 2008 22:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like it. Sadly there are very few 'Tomoe survived' type AU fics. Watching the OVA, you really feel that the two of them deserved a better life. I hope you continue this one and keep writing more of the sort.
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Reviewed By: sombre illusion On: September 17, 2006 00:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now, not only 10 for the enjoyment factor but more like 10x10 ^^ I really did enjoy your story ! You have such a good creativity ! You must really keep up the good work. Pleassssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeee update soon. I put your story in my fav so that I can go see if you have updated. Please.... just don't stop and do more chapter. This fic was good. I just can't wait to see romance ^^
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Title: *Trying to read all the fanfics that she never read so all her reviews are late lol*
Reviewed By: Yarisha The Fox Demon On: March 14, 2004 17:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update. It was very nice. ~Ja ne~
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Title: good
Reviewed By: ToHeLlWiThThEnIcKs [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2003 21:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is good! great with the discription! is there going to be battousai with the yellow/golden eyes in it? i think he should be in it! its really good keep up the good work!!!! update soon
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Reviewed By: Badiyannu On: July 23, 2003 15:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, Bri! Great ficcy! I like the way you used some of my ideas! ^.^ Heehee...
CONTINUE SOON!
BTW, I, too, have also posted a new Rurouni Kenshin located at ff.net. Go check under my name. |
Reviewed By: ID Theif On: July 23, 2003 09:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really don't review on this, but i liked it, i enjoyed how you made Tomeo (sp?) alive, instead of dead. Good Job keep going! |
