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| "Confessions Of A Believer: II" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: A True Believer On: July 30, 2004 09:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great! You've managed to keep everyone in charector! Vegeta's a bastard but I guess thats how he is. Your version of Bulma is so much like the Bulma on the series, Good Job! Only, how come Ami never met Bra or Trunks? Don't they live in Capsule Corp.?
| Reviewed By: Ryven Sorane [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 03:27 CDT
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Nicely done, it's very dramatic and stuff. Hope "Ami" gets the fuck outta there, and Piccolo whomps on him, just 'cause Piccolo's badass like that.
Hey, it could happen!
Hrm, makes me wanna write a self insertion. Nothing romantic, of course, 'cause it'd be with Piccolo. Hrm....
*thinks*
... I think I already have one that I could put up for j00, to keep you occupied while I try and be inspired enough to finish the next chapter on Bonds and Beginnings....
...
...yes, that could work peerrrfectly....
Muwahahahahahah!
Again, great job! | Reviewed By: Chibi Gemi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2003 21:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(cries) 'Jita's being such a bastard!
Kurai: Hey, you do the zoning out thing Gemi does! wah...off topic. Yes, our Ouji is being a bit of a prick.
(sniff) I just want to strangle him! (growls)
Kurai: Bulma's even more of a vain bitch than most people make her out to be. ^_^ I think your version is more accurate.
Well, this is going great. Sorry if I haven't reviewed, but the site wasn't showing the chapters 4-9. I couldn't get at them, just FYI.
Kurai: Ouji-sama needs a good ass whooping.
Yup. Hey, we gotta go and work on some fics of our own.
Kurai: Take it easy.
Both: WE LOVE YOU!!
Much luck & Inspiration!
Later DAyz & TAnx!! ^_^
-Gemi & Kurai | Reviewed By: Chibi Gemi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2003 12:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
w00t!!
Ami's having a baby! Or is it you? ....(thinks really hard) ow... (passes out from the strain)
Kurai: -_- feh. What my mistress WAS going to tell you, was that she's ecstatic about the sequel and thinks it's going great.
We both love this and hope the next chapter comes out soon.
Much luck & Inspiration
Later DAyz & TAnx!! ^_^
Gemi (x_x ow...) & Kurai (-_- puny fangirl intellect...) | Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 23:28 CDT
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*cringes* what a dick head... blasted Saiyan ego! You really should smack him around... hehe
Dang girl... that's one hell of an emotional rollercoaster! Vegeta's on his usual "Im too high and mighty to even consider being sensitive to your feelings" trip, and here you are feeling guilty about cheating on your bf and probably being pregnant... *growls*
Typical man, I swear...
*chews on her tongue rings*
Well, you MUST get the next chapter out soon! I need new reasons to whip out my baseball bat on a certain Ouji ;)
I'll be back for more!
Toodles! | Reviewed By: Chibi Gemi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 20:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, you and Vegeta are being VERY naughty...
Hm...I don't know, it's probably just me, but that whole 'sickness after sex' thing just seemed like a good lead into a pregnancy... hehe, that'd be fun to tell your boyfriend. And how would you get around to telling Vegeta?!?
There i go rambling again! ^_^ Do i have to tell you how much i liked that? I thought not. oh Hell, I LOVED IT!! MORE PLEASE!
Much luck and Inspiration
Later DAyz & TAnx!!^_^
-Gemi |
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