| "Getting Better With A Twist" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: KawaiiJade [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 21:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh that was so sweet. And *yummy* Haha I want more. This pair is just so cute and right. I'll be looking for more.
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Reviewed By: Rei-Rei On: July 25, 2003 23:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww how cute! ^_^ keep updatin! |
Reviewed By: inu_loves_kag On: July 24, 2003 23:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey update ur fic soon! it seems really cute! ^_^
*~*im ur first review!! Yay!*~* |
Reviewed By: Kithkin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2003 21:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
Um, in the first chapter Inuyasha says that she's not going back, then 3 lines later he's gentlely assisting her, without any indication that he's changed his mind. In third chapter I think your gave Kagome a bit too much stamina, and the g-spot a bit too much importance, but they alway say that practice make perfect, right? It's a cute idea, and while it has been done before you brought a nice spin to it. |
