Reviewed By: Chibi Fangirl from Hell On: December 06, 2003 16:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the story it's self, but the way it's writed is confusing. You just have one big paragraph. @_@. There are a few spelling errors, and that just confused me more. But, all in all it's good. Write more!!!
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