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| "Caught" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: and tears ensue
Reviewed By: viciouscallisto On: November 22, 2003 23:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh! that was just wonderful! i loved it so much!!*squeling goes on for several seconds* okay, at first i thought that hakkia would walk away from gojyo and not give him time to apoligize, so i was like "no!!! i don't feel like reading angst tonight! forgive him hakkia! and gojyo, don't do that again!" but im so happy with the oucome. it was a sweet ending. and my tears are tears of happiness!! happy ending yay!
| Reviewed By: angelic_yokai On: October 17, 2003 15:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
very cool, i love gojyo+hakkai, overall good writing style.
| Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: __Nomi__ (not signed in) On: September 13, 2003 16:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've only just recently gotten to see Saiyuki (i.e.: Two days ago...), and this is the first fiction I've ever read, and boy am I glad! This was an incredible story. My only regret is that it was way too short!
You portrayed the characters very well, and I felt the emotions quite clearly. I was beyond pleased to see that your grammar is impeccable! I'm a real stickler for things like that...
There's only one bad thing, though. I'm going to use this fic as the basis for all the other Saiyuki fics I will read. ^__^ Beautifully well-written. I hope you have more fics for me to read...::goes off to look:: |
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