| "The Reincarnation of Ephemeral Existence." Reviews/Comments [ 74 ] |
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2004 02:06 CST
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Ok, that ended rather abruptly! Not what I was expecting, to say the least... It felt as though it could have been much longer, but I guess you felt the end to be there... after all, you are the authoress, and what you say goes... *sigh* But anyway, I don't mind really because this fic still was awsome! I'm getting hooked on vamp fics... it's all so fun, doesn't even seem to matter what anime it's from! I think I just have a liking for the undead mysteries such as vampires... who knows, after all I am a little on the crazy side anyway... ROFL
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Reviewed By: HappyDragon(logged out) On: September 04, 2004 23:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yugi still reminds me of "Garrett" mixed with "Blade's" bloodlust and a large dose of insane. Glad to see the continuation is just as wonderful as the first. I've lost count how many times I've read the end to this fic, it always seems to pick me up when I'm down. Still funny as always, but I'm starting to see a "Who's stalking Yugi this fic?" joke in the making. First one Kaiba then the other, it's just not his lucky life. The funniest thing would probably have to be . . . Um. . ok. . . I can think of something. . .Aww kuso, it's all fun and funny, and I love it when the muses bicker and talk back. The fic is just wonderful all over, and doesn't lose any momentum from the first. And as with last time there is a line in here I will never forget, "Yami looked like sex poured into a body suit. Hell the tight plastic body suit looked like it had been poured onto Yami." One thing that gets me is that there is setup for another continuation/sequel, which I would love to see. I mean some things that I wonder are, How did Yugi do what he did in the first chapter, or push Yami away later? How could he see magic? Who was the bike rider in white? Will Yami eventually turn Yugi? What was everyone talking about right before Yugi skited out? And what the hell is the story behind Yami's scar? So anyway, here's to hoping that we will one day see the continuation of this story. I know I'll read it if that day comes.
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Reviewed By: Dark Cherub [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2004 01:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Huff...-_-; ya no...i finished reading dis fic...several months ago...and keep on thinking about it...^^so i just went through the entire thing...all over again...and printed it allllllll out...did you no that both this fic and de 1st 1 are 130 something pages? that's saying somethin. Don't you think? Any way...i luved it muches!!!!! And just wanted to say, your a realllllllllllllllllllly gooooo writer!!!^^
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Reviewed By: Sweetdeily [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 19:35 CDT
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Reviewed By: Slate Grey [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 13:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good god, you're killing me here. Read the first one and fell instantly in love with your style and had minor heart palpitations when I realized that no, the story was *not* over and there was still more to read... and now I'm somehow reading this futuristic, beautiful story that has me very confused and very happy all at the same time. It's like a birthday present, but with many, many character deaths. *grins* In any case, I'm just pausing in the middle of this second story to let you know that I love it. Particular things I love? Mmm. Yugi's personality, *Yami's* personality, the little voice, the complicated plot, the naughty christmas carols, the action scenes, the bizarre humor, the writing style and, well, everything. Thanks for giving me a fun few hours!
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Reviewed By: Vampire Inuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2003 23:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOO IT CAN'T BE OVER!! IT WAS JUST GETTING GO TO! ONE QUESTION SO WAS YUGI A VAMPIRE OR WAS YAMI GOING TO BITE HIM AND DRINK HIS BLOOD? Vampire Inuyasha
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Reviewed By: Toki Mirage [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2003 02:12 CDT
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it's OVER?????!!!!!!!!!!!! HOW IN THE hell CAN IT BE OVER!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! THE APOCOLYPSE HAS ARRIVED!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: DarkWolf On: August 18, 2003 23:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have just got to say, your fan-fics are totally awesome, you have a grace when you write, like you are your characters, you bring them to life, even though you don't own them, (wish that we could) I can't wait to see more from you, and if you could, please email me and let me know which of your stories are Yugioh, and maybe reccommend a few other authors? I'm new to reading Yugi fics, and am absolutely falling in love with them.
Thank you, DarkWolf
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Reviewed By: Fallen Hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2003 10:20 CDT
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hey--
wonderful! i loved the lemon. excellent writing. yes, it was a bit anti-climatic...but ya can't have everything, ne? i still thought it was great.
i look forward to reading your new story.
keep writin'!
~*Fallen Hikari*~ ^__^[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Yugi_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2003 07:21 CDT
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I truely love this story. And a sequel would make a lot of people happy, including me ^__^
You did a great job! and please don't stop! ^__-[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Cherreh [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2003 23:04 CDT
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Lemony ending! Gotta love it! ^_^ Sequel? Yes yes yes!! :)
~~~Cherry~~~[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: firestar On: August 17, 2003 16:57 CDT
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heyyyyyyyyyyyy! final chappy and yugi loves yami, and got his sanity back- I just love happy endings. I hope you plan on making another story, you have such talent in the writing department. well. thanks for writing.[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Kannie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2003 15:46 CDT
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*innocently* What happend to the little voice in yugi's head?
lolz
laughing like a maniac!
dunno y
but as u look into my head:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO~~~
IT'S OVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
IT CAN'T BBBEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE~~~~~~~~~!!!!!!![ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: E On: August 17, 2003 10:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The ending was alright. I find it funny that just before the puzzle is mentioned I think about how I kept forgetting to ask about the puzzle and then wallah the puzzle has been there but ignored all this time. It's sad that the murderous Yugi has gone into retirement but how you solved that was pretty good. I can't wait for your next masterpiece. Though I hope that there is a sequel one day.[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: E On: August 13, 2003 04:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm such a terrible reveiwer. I love what you write I'm just very lazy and count on other people to do the reveiws sorry. Any way everything was great. Yugi running off screaming and then slamming into the wall was great. Though I was waiting for him to use that power to blow away the wall, that he used it on Yami was cool, though I was expecting that to happen eventually I didn't think Yami would be the first to get a taste of it. It seems you almost have this story done, but before you end it is there a possibility that we would get a glimpse of what Yami thinks about being in love w/a partially insane vampire serial killer? I can actually see Yugi claiming that all vampire's are scum and need to be killed except Yami offcourse he's different. I have seen racist peaple actually curse one race while being married to somebody of said race. Besides I don't really want the homicidal Yugi to take a permanent vacation. Its a part of him and its therepy for him. Can't wait for the next update though I hope it was an exageration when you said a whole week till the next update. I really look forward to every new chapter.[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: E On: August 13, 2003 04:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm such a terrible reveiwer. I love what you write I'm just very lazy and count on other people to do the reveiws sorry. Any way everything was great. Yugi running off screaming and then slamming into the wall was great. Though I was waiting for him to use that power to blow away wall, that he used on Yami was cool though I was expecting that happen eventually I think Yami would be the first. It seems you almost have this story done, but before you end it is there a possibility that we would get a glimpse of what Yami think about being in love w/a partially insane vampire serial killer? I can actually see Yugi claiming that all vampire are scum and need to be killed except Yami offcourse he's different. I have seen racist peaple actually curse one race while being married to somebody of said race. Besides I don't really want the homicidal Yugi to take a permanent vacation. Its a part of him and its therepy for him. Can't wait for the next update though I hope it was an exageration when you said a whole till the next update. I really look forward for a new chapter.[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Moonlitspire On: August 09, 2003 19:54 CDT
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Nice lil chappie. No lemon (darn) but good still! I'd love to read a pirate fic. Sounds interesting. Partly cuz i watched Pirates of the caribbean and it was one of my favourite movies this summer, and partly cuz im confident that you'll be able to make it good. well, until next time. Bye![ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: No-name critic On: August 09, 2003 15:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Of all the writing that I've read ever. I would have to say that your material is one of the best I've ever seen. Proper grammar, orginality,humor, slight horror, and keep the yaoi at a fair level to keep the story flowing. Very well done. I look foward to reading more of your chapters and stories. Well done.[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Charmeleon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2003 14:23 CDT
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Why would you describe your writing as the sh word? I actually like it even though I despise the curse words. I try to look past them, but I can't.[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Shadow-Specter [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2003 11:58 CDT
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one week chappies! Oh no! ^^; it's okay, as long as you update! This story is so great! I hope Yugi doesn't kill Yami! They are meant to be together! It would be just so wrong! Oh well, even if he does kill him in the end, this is still a wonderful fic and I would still love it no matter what!! ^_^ continue as soon as you can please!![ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: firestar On: August 09, 2003 11:41 CDT
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*sighs in fustration* evil cliffy. please continue. You know I like that little voice in the back of yugi's head, he's cool.[ Request Review Removal ] |
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