| "The Reincarnation of Ephemeral Existence." Reviews/Comments [ 74 ] |
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Reviewed By: Cherreh [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2003 04:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
Lemon? *smile*
Yami: Lemon? *grin*
Some lemony good ness. ^_^ Me like. :P
Update soon!
~~~Cherry~~~ |
Reviewed By: Mortalgirl On: July 31, 2003 02:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LoL me again.. actually I reread the first paragraph of chapter nine... I didn't read the story wrong I read your author notes wrong
You can think of my constant ranting as umm a type of worship? *shrug* lol well good job!! I think you'd get more reviews on ff.net.. maybe a couple hundred more? but there really picky on there ratings ne? oh wellz.. take comfort in the fact that I worship your writing.. if it's any comfort at all ^^ |
Reviewed By: Mortalgirl On: July 31, 2003 02:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Did you know I read both your stories.. this whole time I forgot to review.. and I've been checking for it nearly every day.. actually when I have time I check it many times a day :D
and when you update you don't just put up one chapter.. you put up many!! ^^
LoL your one of the fantastic writers who don't need to be constantly bombarded :D
any ways just saying great work and thanks
hehe.. Yugi should listen to the voice more often... but tell me..
how is there going to be a lemon if Yugi's screaming at Malik.. didn't he kill him when he was nine?? Or did I just not read the story properly.. I think i'll go back and do just that ^^ |
Reviewed By: E On: July 30, 2003 02:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic and I love Yugi more. A ego tripping Yugi is the best. I have a few guesses as to who might be the rider to the bike but I'm not betting on it. Hope you update soon. I have been checking out for this update everyday and Im wondering how I missed it the first place. I wish more writers acknowledge Yugi's strength more. |
Reviewed By: Silver Lily aka Blood Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*voice in head sreams* yeah!!! LEMONS!!! WOHOO!!!!*
You see that little vice in Yuugi's head and the little voice in my head think along pretty much the same lines, and right now I'm inclined to agree with it. Continue!!!! |
Reviewed By: Lauren Filiatreault On: July 28, 2003 15:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
eeeeeeeekkkkkkkkk!!!!! i must see more!! and sex scenes too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I think the bike rider is Yami! |
Reviewed By: Shadow-Specter [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 14:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey! Great chappie ^_^ I'm guessing the rider on the white bike is Yami...if it isn't Yami then I'm guessing it's Seto. One or the other ^_^ Please put some yami/yugi ness up soon!!! |
Reviewed By: *Elizabeth*Marie*Rose* [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 14:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is really, wonderfully, excellently perfect! And Yugi with guns and weapons and on an ego trip is one of the sexiest things I can imagine! Thank you for giving us this delicious glimpse of Yugi! I kind of wish Ryou and Bakura didn't have to die, but... Keep up the excellent wonderful perfect work! |
Reviewed By: RyuArashi On: July 28, 2003 13:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Of course...the rider of the white bike is...Yami!
Lord...our Yugi sure is stubborn, isn't he? Even after all the phenomenal sex...wait, it's been 730 years...Man, he *needs* to get laid, and soon!
Seriously, I love both your stories...you've shown Yugi to be what I believe him to be-a strong, smart, cute, but sexy little guy...! I *really* want him and Yami to get together, though.*smirks* Yami is sooo sexy! I also love how you showed that he can be vulnerable with the person he loves....I know before Yugi finally admits he's deeply in love with Yami, there'll be many ups and downs....besides, who else can Yugi-chan love but the guy that can make him cum just by inserting his finger? *cackles* Great work, hon...I look forward to the next installment! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Moonlitspire On: July 28, 2003 13:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yes...so coincidental? I can always hope... ^__^ Hurry up and post! Too much suspense is bad for your health XD
I love this story to death! Byee! |
Reviewed By: Fallen Hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 13:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey---
excellent as usual....can't wait to see a lemon. i can smell the citrusy freshness of it now!
keep up the great work and please update soon!
~*Fallen Hikari*~ ^__^ |
Reviewed By: mortalgirl On: August 17, 2003 18:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
weeeeeehee happy lemony ending!!
altho I will miss Yugi's perverted voice in this head hehe that thing was cool
neeee wayz.. more spoilers are never bad hehe
I look forward to this pirate thingy and Ryou is so adorable back there hehe I've come to suck yer blood.. aww how kawaii is that..
and as for Yugi sigh pwease make him only non con with yami.. i hate it when he's with anyone else :P haha enough ramblings from me
good sequal! please continue your work |
Reviewed By: Cherreh [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 03:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
I have an idea who that might be but I'll keep it to myself incase I;'m wrong... Update soon!
~~~Cherry~~~ |
Reviewed By: Amethyst Dragon On: July 27, 2003 19:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i knew it!!!! it WAS Mokuba!!!! er...gomen...i am sugar high at the moment. BUT YAY!!!! YOU UPDAAAAAAAAAAAAATED!!!! ^____^ I LOVE THIS ALREADY, YOU KNOW THAT!!! now for all those missed birthdays you mentioned in the fic, this is for Yuugi-kun! 730 years worth of candy!!! i know...a lot...^_^ fun. onegai update soon!!! i was grinning like...like...Jou in a candy-shop when i found out you updated! ^_^ so kawaii. please continue. ja ne!!! |
Reviewed By: Fallen Hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2003 18:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey--
i've read your other story and i'm sorry i never reviewed. i had read the second chapter and then hadn't been able to go onto a computer for who knows how long and now i see that it was already finished. AND you have two chapters already for the sequel. you're fast. damn, you're good.....i wish i could write that quickly. but nooooo, i have to go to work everyday and attempt to drag my lazy ass out of bed when i'm trying to catch up on sleep let alone find time to start a new story.
*clears throat* so anyways, enough with my complaining.....on with the review. excellent story and the sequel already seems to be turning out just as wonderful. everything fits so neatly together like a never-ending puzzle. i love it! but in the end, i hope yugi goes back to yami.....pwease? *chibi eyes*
keep up the great work and please update soon! i can't wait to read more.
~*Fallen Hikari*~ ^__^ |
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