| "The Reincarnation of Ephemeral Existence." Reviews/Comments [ 74 ] |
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Reviewed By: firestar On: August 02, 2003 12:46 CDT
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I like this story, very creative and very interesting. so I will be very happy if you would be so very kind to continue: ) |
Reviewed By: Moonlitspire On: August 02, 2003 12:38 CDT
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hehehe! Yuugi's a lemon magnet. Ok ok, hmmm..let me think about this first. Too much Yuugi lovin' is sooo overdone, but good nevertheless. I don't really care what kind of lemon Yuugi gets, as long as he gets it! *whacks self on head for being in extreme hentai mood* Oh yes..and if he gets raped in reality or in his dreams or whatever, then he and Yami can have more..um..angsty moments? Heh, im a sucker for angst. Anyway, ME WANT MORE OF YOUR VERY GOOD STORY! ME WANTSSSSS ITTTTT... |
Reviewed By: Silver Lily aka Blood Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 11:08 CDT
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No! No rape! Yami and Yuugi action!!! YEAH YEAH YEAH!!!!! Please? |
Reviewed By: Amethyst Dragon On: August 01, 2003 10:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAAAAAAIIIII!!!! TWO NEW CHAPPIES!!!!!!! ^_________^ WAHOOOOOOOO!!!!!! yes!!!! i love it when you update!!! this is one really great fic!!! i lvoe the plote and your writing style!!!! IT'S TERRIFIC!!! and that's why you whould continue and update sooooooon!!!! |
Reviewed By: Amethyst Dragon On: August 01, 2003 10:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAAAAAAIIIII!!!! TWO NEW CHAPPIES!!!!!!! ^_________^ WAHOOOOOOOO!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Gackt's Koneko On: August 01, 2003 10:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
TYPE WOMAN! TYPE!!!! ME WANT LEMON!!!! *sweatdrop*
i love your story.......hehehehehehehehehe..... |
Reviewed By: Lauren Filiatreault On: July 31, 2003 16:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YaY!!!!!!! an update!!!!!! i must see more!!!!! And I know why Yuugi screams!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please, update soon!! With a lemon!!!!
Lauren |
Reviewed By: Silver Lily aka Blood Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2003 16:13 CDT
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Hmm. . .Juicy lemon. Looking forward to that!!!! |
Reviewed By: Shadow-Specter [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2003 13:49 CDT
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MALIk is the one who killed Yugi's parents...Marik looked like him so he screamed ^_^ there is what I really meant |
Reviewed By: Shadow-Specter [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2003 13:48 CDT
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^^; well I was expecting a lemon or something by the way this chappie was heading but oh well. I think I know why Yugi is screaming...is Marik the one who killed Yugi's parents and tortured him?! I think he is...why else would he scream? Unless it is a new plot twist you're adding. Oh well. Looking forward to the next chappie! This fic rocks! ^_^ [gives a vampire Yami plushie to Sweetdeily] to motivate you to update ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Fallen Hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2003 09:20 CDT
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hey--
excellent work. i loved the way you expressed yugi's thoughts of how the world changes, leaving loved ones and things behind, and so on and so forth. very expressive.
nice job describing yugi's conflicting emotions for yami. i laughed when i read the part about yugi explaining the voice in his head. teehee.
oh, i get it.....yugi must think that marik is malik----ya know...since they look alike and malik is the one that did all that bad stuff to the little guy. awwww....poor yugi.
*huge grin* a lemon? oh....i can't wait for it!
keep up the great work and please update soon!
(do my comments seem varied and random? probably......)
~*Fallen Hikari*~ ^__^ |
Reviewed By: E On: July 31, 2003 05:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic. Yugi is the greatist. I love how he is a strong sarcastic ego tripping upbeat guy. It seems most peaple are guesing that Yami is the guy w/ the white bike. I don't blame them because they belong together but I'm hoping for Yami to get competition temporarily. After all if somebody from a race one hated for most of one's life,1) mislead them into believing them to be something they werent.2) Didn't respect ones decision and back off trying to force them into a relationship they werent ready for,{after all he could of tried to court him and change his mind, instead of confirming that all vamps are basterds}. 3) put him to sleep, never to see his family and friends again. Well I think a person would be pist and need alot of incentive to forgive. Besides its not offent Yugi gets to give Yami hell. Having him chase after Yugi w/ a few failed attemps would be funny.
Anyway I think I'll stop my mild ranting and just beg you to please continue to update as soon as possible. |
Reviewed By: Cherreh [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2003 04:33 CDT
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Lemon? *smile*
Yami: Lemon? *grin*
Some lemony good ness. ^_^ Me like. :P
Update soon!
~~~Cherry~~~ |
Reviewed By: Mortalgirl On: July 31, 2003 02:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LoL me again.. actually I reread the first paragraph of chapter nine... I didn't read the story wrong I read your author notes wrong
You can think of my constant ranting as umm a type of worship? *shrug* lol well good job!! I think you'd get more reviews on ff.net.. maybe a couple hundred more? but there really picky on there ratings ne? oh wellz.. take comfort in the fact that I worship your writing.. if it's any comfort at all ^^ |
Reviewed By: Mortalgirl On: July 31, 2003 02:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Did you know I read both your stories.. this whole time I forgot to review.. and I've been checking for it nearly every day.. actually when I have time I check it many times a day :D
and when you update you don't just put up one chapter.. you put up many!! ^^
LoL your one of the fantastic writers who don't need to be constantly bombarded :D
any ways just saying great work and thanks
hehe.. Yugi should listen to the voice more often... but tell me..
how is there going to be a lemon if Yugi's screaming at Malik.. didn't he kill him when he was nine?? Or did I just not read the story properly.. I think i'll go back and do just that ^^ |
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