| "A Fine Line -WK" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: FINNISH IT!!!!!
Reviewed By: Shinya On: August 12, 2005 10:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:LSKDJFsoidjaf;ls FINNISH IT PLEASE T_T
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Reviewed By: darkeyes On: October 30, 2004 22:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful! I hope that you continue this fanfic soon! The way you portray the characters is absolutely amazing! And, finally, you've let Ran and Ken have some! I hope that those two can eventually work out their...issues. Anyway, please write more and post soon!
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Reviewed By: buenagirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 19:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am really enjoying this little ficcie of yours. You have a very interesting imagination and they way you are mixing things up just has me enthralled. Keep it up... ^_^
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Reviewed By: baisu On: September 27, 2004 22:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
This series is wonderful! I love how you've written the characters and the relationships, particularly the Ran/Ken relationship. I can just SEE it all happening exactly as you have described! I can't wait for the next chapter; please post more soon!
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Reviewed By: Lynn Linhares On: February 27, 2004 06:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this story as well as the companion piece, you have me totally hooked on Ken/Ran, Omi/Youji and I can't wait for more updates!!!!!! Please write more soon :)
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Reviewed By: Ranja On: January 11, 2004 10:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh...this fanfic is fantastic!!i really love it!!poor ken..is life is really out of control right now, isn´t it?^ ^ please don´t leave me hanging like this and update SOON!!!i hate cliff hangers.....>
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Reviewed By: Satoshi Fujimiya [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2003 04:22 CST
Comment/Review:
AAAAAAAAHHHHHHH !!!!!!!!!! *whimper* A cliff hanger !!!!!! please write some more...i don't know how long i can hang ^___^
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Reviewed By: Koco On: December 08, 2003 04:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg!!! that is the wosrt cliffhanger ever!! *sobs* its not fair.... but other then that this fic was a crack up to read, i havn;t had a laugh so hard for awhile. keep up the good work ^_^ and i want the nxt chapter! *whines*
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Title: A Fine Line
Reviewed By: HeatherR On: September 20, 2003 21:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Dear Moonraven,
I'm really enjoying your fic and I can't wait for you to update again. I know they're going to eventually arrive on an island and I can't wait! You've built up the tension between Ran and Ken perfectly, and captured their characterizations very well.
This is also the only crossover I've read and enjoyed. I usually don't like them and aviod them, but I tried it on a lark, and now I can't wait for the next installment.
Thank you for writing such a great story and for continuing to update.
Heather |
Reviewed By: SandraXX On: July 30, 2003 13:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEEAASE CONTINUE! This is such a great story! Never thought that Aya could be so horny *gg*!!!
Kenken an die Macht!! |
Reviewed By: IcaBob On: July 24, 2003 23:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT!!!! NOW YOU MUST CONTINUE SOON |
Reviewed By: littleisa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2003 16:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh I like this fic! I hope you update it soon, I wanna know what is going on! *bounces* Danke!
Isa-chan |
