| "Ranma X" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Vilkath [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2007 14:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Over all pretty enjoyable fic, if a bit average. It is one your oldest fics, so it is hard to complain, but the writing/dialog in this is pretty bad. It improves in the later chapters, but the dialog is still pretty wooden, and plot is rushed with few explinations about what happens. I think your choice in Ranma's mutant abilitiy is pretty inventive and neat, a boast in his abilities but also a drain on his old Ki skills. You did sort of gloss over some the core Ranma facts, his ability to attack girls, his feelings about teaching martial arts. Not to mention revealing amazon secret techniques to them. Not a bad fic, but also it didn't really get any where before it was cancled.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 16:21 CDT
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Holy shit. This is incredibly amusing, and I just wish it was continued. Over 2 years since you last updated this story, and I hope a few new chapters will be coming out soon. Anyway, I love the story, especially the last chapter (how is Rogue gonna act once the energy she absorbed returns? that I want to see) and of course some new abilities for Mouse is always cool. Well, please update soon. Later
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Reviewed By: Trahloc On: September 23, 2005 23:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic you've got going here. Looks like you spread yourself out over the months writing it. Hope you continue the work. You've got a large setup here, can't wait to see how Ranma works out his mutant power and who the hell he ends up with (Rogue! :). Well 'night, finished my marathon reading session heh.
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Reviewed By: Gopu On: October 07, 2004 02:47 CDT
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Great chapter
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Reviewed By: NoOnE(NoOnE) On: September 30, 2004 07:05 CDT
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fix the first chapter wraped like it is its hard to read
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Reviewed By: HV On: September 03, 2004 18:42 CDT
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I work with out a Beta/Proof reader so it can be raw and painful. Also with the Rival's power up. In much of Ranma the rivals tend to get a power up through training...or an object of an unfair advantage. (EX. Ryoga gained a god mark that made him unbeatable. Akane got something similar witha battle dogi. It was up to Ranma's inherit power, his training and his seldem used intelligence that made him trimuph over the power, god boost.) Plus Ranma needs to get his butt kicked every once and awhile to boost his training and power. In the Manga/Anime, he reacts to other people to develop rather than doing it on his own. In this fic, he's starting to get over it. With the update, I've been having a slow month. Plus I've been working on my erotic Fan fic/Erotic work and my Addventures/Chyoo additions. Plus I've been having a slump. Comments on what you like about the story and things you want to see might perk me up. Thanks and I hope I can make you happy. HV
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Reviewed By: Goldenstrand On: July 20, 2004 22:14 CDT
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A pretty good story. It appears in some spots "can" was accidentally put in place of "can't," making some statements seem odd, but other than that it seems like a decent story so far. Hopefully one will not have to wait much longer for an update...
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Reviewed By: an author On: July 13, 2004 23:18 CDT
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sounds interesting... but here is something that makes the entire story lacking. ranma has to train to get his powers up to snuff. while his rivals/enemies are getting free power ups and virtual reality usage in learning how to control them. making them stronger than ranma and getting to the point of getting beaten. no offense but it seems a tad unfair that ranma has to work for his control while magneto just powers up his rivals and gives them super control. anyhow i look forward to more chapters.
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Reviewed By: Barrakketh On: June 13, 2004 18:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
darkfource? needs some work
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Reviewed By: Amora Laflour [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2004 14:20 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i agree people are stupid if they dont loooooved it keep going love the darkness powers
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Reviewed By: White Fox 612 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2004 19:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is really cool! I read up 2 chapter 3 some time ago, then I checked up on it and it still had no reviews!! People are stupid if they don't like this story. people don't really know about Ranma 1/2. Plz update this fic SOON ne? Ja!
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