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| "Eternal City:Crystal Tokyo" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: What a Story
Reviewed By: Moonlight Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 01:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fiction has continued to impress me with its complex plot and the way it has been written. I'm now a very big fan of yours nd intend to read your other stories;once I have an exam out of the way.
| Reviewed By: Moonlight Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2007 13:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have always wanted to review this fiction and I have commenced reading it! It is one of the best I have come across and I will try to read the rest later! I just wish someone would review my fics that I've got posted here! Agin, thanks for A SMASHING READ! I will enjoy the other chapters immensely!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
| Title: Eternal City: Crystal Tokyo
Reviewed By: Saekochan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 14:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ok, this story is really really good, and I love the way you put them all in together.... Just one little problem... Why did you use ALL girl/girl pairings? The only guy/girl couple I see here is the one set by Naoko Takeuchi, Usa/Mamoru. I love seeing girl/girl relationships, it makes me proud that everyone is finally accepting them, but the way you made almost all of the characters lesbians makes the story, and you because you wrote it, biased against straight couples. I think you might want to rethink your plans here, or add in some guy/girl couples. That way it looks like its actually people in there, and not fictional characters. Real people have many different tastes and if you make it look like everyone but the Royal Couple only has one kind of taste, they dont seem real. Thats just my thoughts on it. I really do love the story tho, and I hope to see more of it. :--DSaeko
| Reviewed By: David Lee On: November 16, 2003 01:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I like this story well you consider a character that I have made for alot of stories as a character if so here she is: Name:Lisa MoonRaker Age:15 Eye Color:Violet rimmed with tint of yellow. Hair Color:Dark Red with Purple highlights curly done down to her hips and has bangs which are springy. Height:6"1 inches tall Weight:97lbs Appearance:Lisa is built like a fighter and to that appearance is true she is probably the strongest none Senshi warrior who isnt part of Queen Serenitys old friends or Senshi she stand 6"1 and is very thin and has the look of someone who can take down someone with no problem. Lisa wears her hair down to her hips done in no particualar fashion and wears different styles and never stays in one style for hair or clothes but her favourite outfit is a dark Violet miniskirt and light violet sleeveless shirt with a symbol of Shadow and also a second symbol which is Water and wears over that a long dark blue trenchcoat. Skills and Powers:Lisa is skilled as a Martial Artist and could give Lady Uranus in a fight with physically but not if she was Sailor Uranus her Martial Arts are above normal human levels she is also skilled with the elements of Shadow and Water but is really skilled with Psi abilities. Lisa also took Gymnastics and is very flexible and can change her style to fit her foe and could even sneak up on any of the old Senshi who havent transformed. History:Lisa like all the other inhabitants was thought to have been sleeping during the Ice Age which nearly took out the Senshi and there allies but Lisa somehow witnessed everything and lived and didnt into cryongenic sleep like everyone else but doesnt remember all that happened during the battle for Earth to Become Crystal Tokyo and unify under Queen Serenity and King Endyimon so she probably is the oldest none guardian of the Queen and King though her appearance well come to there notice sooner or later. Lisa was born and raised in Tokyo itself and when she wished for it her parents sent her to a Shaolin Temple to train her body and mind she became almost to the reflexes of the Senshi of the current time before Crystal Tokyo and when she witnessed the battle of the Ages she discovered her Psi and other powers and sent what she could to Sailor Moon and that helped win the war for Earth and that is all she wrote for her past her family died during the Ice Age but Lisa survived and well be bitter when whoever first meets her but well make friends really fast and adapt to her new situation. Anyway I like this story so can you please add my character please I am really interested in this.
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