| "A Goddess Comes to Call" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: namae On: December 06, 2004 21:16 CST
Comment/Review:
interesting! nice style of writing, but do take note of your grammar (= sometimes that just makes all the difference. overall, i had a great read. thanks so much!
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Title: Nice One
Reviewed By: KitKatKrazy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 14:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great! Lost me for a few minutes but I caught on! I enjoyed it a bunch! I'm a new writer! Check out my 1st story!
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Reviewed By: The 13th Knight On: October 15, 2004 20:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job again, Shane! You always know how to blend romantics with comedy, and this story wasn't different. I've never read either of these two animes, but you made it very easy to understand what was happening, and I thank you for that. I liked how most people paired together nicely, though, I think some parts I wasn't supposed to read, being only 15. Anywho, Amazing story, very sweet, and still funny!
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Title: random l33t master
Reviewed By: Z4N3 On: May 03, 2004 21:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
yo this was truly a fun read you have an interesting way of mixing tales i look foward to reading more of your works. please try to continue this series it was a new twist that truly entertained me
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