| "My Heart, Rest In Pieces" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: FIRE Tiger [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2009 13:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story its so different this is the first story ive read were one of the main characters is dead. please update the story soon
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Title: arizonasiren
Reviewed By: arizonasiren [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2008 11:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really into ghosts and Inuyasha fanfics. I just love your story. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to your next update.
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Reviewed By: Kaixi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 11:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey great story, it's really gripping. Hope you update sometime soon.
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Reviewed By: inu fan (but it won't let me log on) On: August 11, 2004 17:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awesome story!!!! Please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: HLU_Me On: July 29, 2003 22:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love your fic much more interesting than most already out there. I'm definitly hooked, I've always loved the supernatural, paranormal one in the same reminds me of X-Files (I love that show).
But I must admit I'm baffled as to who the ghost is, at first I was like 'oh great Kikyou' but the crater threw me because the only crater I can think of is the one that is Miroku's father's grave.
Hope you keep writing this its great I can't wait untill the next chapter! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Starpiper On: July 29, 2003 13:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool...I love a good ghost story and an Inuyasha one is all the better. ^^
I like how you write the story from Sango's POV. It's rare to find fics written around her outlook.
The Kagome/Inuyasha interaction was funny and very much in line with how they acted in the beginning of the manga/anime. ::giggles again at the mental image of Kagome and Inuyasha screaming abuses at each other while Kaede and Sango look on::
As for the ghost...I'm placing my bets on the ghost being Kikyou. House built on an old shrine...kinda makes me lean towards Kikyou. But then, since Sango is so fascinated with the paranormal and the other main pairing is MiroSan, the ghost could well turn out to be Miroku (that would be a little sad, though...). And that crater...::scratches head::
Anyhow, you've got a good story here! I hope you decide to keep writing on it.
Hoeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^V ::Starpiper, who's now found *another* good fic to obsess about for the better part of today:: |
Reviewed By: mandi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2003 22:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is definitly differen't, and interesting! I'm hooked. I don't think I've read a fic yet that is in Sango's POV, which is really cool. It seems to be going pretty slow, but I'm sure it will pick up the pace soon, ne? Anywho, keep up the good work, can't wait more!!
~mandi |
Reviewed By: Starpiper On: August 06, 2003 15:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
I...I was actually kinda right with one of my hunches. Yay! ::does her I-Was-Right happy dance:: Er...wait...that means that Miroku's...d-de-darn it. All of my favorite characters seem to be going that way. ^^
Gah! I'm so mad that I didn't pick up on the crater clue until *AFTER* I read HLU_Me's review just now. Stupid, stupid, stupid! ::bangs head::
Sesshoumaru...with kids. Sesshoumaru with two kids. Sesshoumaru with two kids that seems to be very fond of his legs. ... You rock. That's all I can say to that. ^_^
Kyahhh...I'm so happy you updated this. I'm officially hooked!
Hoeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^V ::Starpiper, feeling the need to attempt her own mystery after she gets done writing her English paper:: |
