| "Kagome's Trap and Inuyasha's Love" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Gracie Stanton On: September 19, 2004 13:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
um.... ya can't write an inuyasha fanfiction if you can't spell the character's name's!!!!! ok.... it Kikyo, miroku, keade, shippo, sango, inuyasha, and kagome!!!! FIX IT!!
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Reviewed By: ang3lic_pl4ya [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 11:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's Miroku. You spelled it wrong. And i aggree with dranged fanfic lover. You should work on your fanfic style and grammer.
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Reviewed By: dranged fanfic lover On: August 21, 2003 01:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
the low rating is because of the writting styal.it brings down the enjoyment |
Reviewed By: the rurouni [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2003 05:14 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
not that bad but you should work on ur grammar |
Reviewed By: Julie On: July 26, 2003 21:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great. Who is it that wants to help? Please post more soon. |
