| "Unbelievable But True" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: Ideas for you
Reviewed By: Foxfire_14 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 08:33 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think you are doing a good job on this story , does kagome become sesshomaru's mate , will seshomaru find out she is from the future , will inuyasha and sesshomaru fight for kagome ? and one more thing will sesshomaru finally get tetsusaiga from inuyasha ? if kagome escapes before inuyasha gets there do think she will go back to her time if she does will sesshomaru follow her and spy on her until she comes back and then kidnap her again , sorry , im just trying to give you ideas , well anyways great work , much love to ya =) Kepp writing and update soon o.k.
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Title: Interesting story
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 16:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Update again soon.
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Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 16:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
The biggest problem I see with your fic is lack of originality. I know it can be hard...the ideas for this could have popped into your head without you having read a single fanfic. However, I cannot count the number of fics that follow the exact pattern you have in yours. What you need is to find something that will break away from the generic Sesshoumaru/Kagome fic. Something to make it your own, so to speak. Good luck ^^ |
