| "Paradise Hotel" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Title: by the way
Reviewed By: Sternocledomastoid On: September 20, 2003 22:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
angel-san
i love it so far, i can't wait for the next chapter.
oh and by the way, my mom said to just go and apply because she has nothing to do with the hiring thing. (she's assist. manager) but yea, just go ahead and apply, and see what happens
and on a more girly note, me you and alex needta get together to figure out a date for our movies night!!!!
Ja ne
~iris~ |
Title: HENTAI!
Reviewed By: Sternocledomastoid On: September 20, 2003 22:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
for someone so sheltered you sure are very well versed in the arts of sex. XP i hope you didn't get into too much trouble after the party. U_U; anyways, on to more cheerful subjects! i love your story, although spell check would help, but yaa. anywho, see ya lata, i'm off to read the next chapter! Ja ne!
~iris~ aka Mari Sakku (on aim), Ayame, Friday, Sternocledomastoid(on ff.net) and AkumaNeko (on AIM) |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2003 20:02 EDT
Comment/Review:
Wow! I have never read so many lemons at one time. Yes, I do appreciate all your gushing details! I'm a little mad at how you ending but you made up with the preview. I can't belive Koga and InuYasha were so slow! All you have to is sniff for the one that smells like sex! Duh! (I'm in a rush so...) Make it up for a longer review next time.
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Reviewed By: AsianEyes [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2003 14:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sounds interesting, but I'll read it once you make it at least understandable. Your words are all mixed and jumbled up and I have no idea in hell what you are talking about. Sorry to leave a bad review, but I'm just saying what I really feel. |
Reviewed By: brittany On: August 01, 2003 19:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
thought it was a great story can't wait to see what happens later |
Reviewed By: Kagome's mate On: July 30, 2003 02:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was pretty good,funny too,but did you HAVE to have Kouga lemon!?*_+I don't like Kouga(mainly because he tries to get Kagome all the time)so PLEASE try to do less of that.Good storyline though.^_^ |
Reviewed By: Sesshoumaru's mate, Reena On: July 26, 2003 02:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's very good and i can't wait till the next chapter. one qorstion though, is there any sess lemons and if there is then u will have one very pissed and possive mate up there it kick the bitches ass. besides that, the only problem with the story is that there was alot of words mixed up and so i made it alittle hard to read but that was the only problem i have so far. wait i take that back i don't like that miss um..i dont know how to spell it, she is to clinging to sess-chan and i don't like that. anyways plz update soon and remember what i said about the sess lemons(lol) |
Reviewed By: Savvy On: July 25, 2003 20:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a terrific story though when the words are mixed up it makes it very confusing to read. That's the only real problem. |
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