| "Paradise Hotel" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: katura22 On: September 12, 2013 07:07 EDT
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Heeeey! I'm interested in reading more of this!! >.< y u no write more?! I know it took me a minute to read up to here, but I did and I really enjoyed it. I want to read more. I was really getting into chapter ten! Sooo, you'll write more, yes? No?......YES!!! |
Title: bet you thought I lied! lol
Reviewed By: katura On: September 01, 2013 06:51 EDT
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Go Shippo! I never would've thought that'd be little Shippo putting it down like that! very descriptive and a good read so far. Oh and Kirara is in here...and she talks! Cuuute! Welp, I'm off to continue my reading. Ttyl girlie! |
Reviewed By: beautifulyreal On: January 20, 2012 16:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like how this story is going so far. I love the inu/kag pairing so I hope the end up together. Defiantly get a beta to help you with the grammar and spelling but other than that great story! |
Title: Paradise Hotel
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2006 22:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Paradise Hotel
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 16:18 EDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapter? Can the pairing be Sess and Kagome please?
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Reviewed By: inuyasha92689 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2005 16:39 EDT
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I love this story a lot its sooooooo funny and i just cnat help but laugh some times ^_^ well anyways i want wait to see what happends next so update it really soon ok thansk tootles. ~Ris~
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Reviewed By: sango_demon_exterminator(not logged in) On: July 21, 2004 19:53 EDT
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I didn't exactly get the story cause all the words were smushed together like this---> hi kagome it would be hikagome.
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Reviewed By: lemon_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2004 16:50 EDT
Comment/Review:
noooooooo don't be cruel please update
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2004 03:50 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow
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Title: inugirl6
Reviewed By: inugirl6 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2003 06:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great keep updating
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Reviewed By: C On: December 01, 2003 23:16 EST
Comment/Review:
update plz. i luv it! tanx!
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2003 22:53 EST
Comment/Review:
Well I didn't expect that. I believe you've done another first. Sorry about the review situation. I think it sucks when people don't give you feedback. Hope everything works out.
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Reviewed By: Suaru-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2003 02:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good!!!! I like very much! Y-you're muse!? *faints* X.x Wow... Thanks....I'll try to update soon...thank you very much! It's been a lot of fun talking to you and you've become a great friend. ^.^ Good luck with all your fics...I'll try and read them...sooner or later. Ttyl! Later, Suaru-chan
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2003 01:35 EDT
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I've got one word to say about this chapter: Damn! Can't wait for the next chapter! Why are you still reading this go write the next chater! Hurry!
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Title: STERNOCLEDOMASTOID
Reviewed By: Razor Blade Magarita [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2003 09:59 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay yay!!!!!!!!! can't wait for the next chapter angel-chan. umm... oh yea!!! i should be updating TD (tragic demise) soon!!! ^_^... i loved this chapter... t'was verah amusing. oh and check out the reviews for lovers bliss, lechers demise on FF.net... verah shocking. newayz g2g2 work now... see ya monday!!!!!!
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