| "Haunting Nightmares" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: BlakSpirit_4evr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 14:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome fic, dude! Can't wait to read new chapters! I exspecially liked the dream chapter!
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Title: Heya!!! Its Kristina!
Reviewed By: Chibi-Sorrow [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 21:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very nice! Yup, your right I do need to update my story...But I already have 2 and 3 written, just need to post ^^;;;. Anyways good story! YOU better update soon to! Later! ^Chibi-Sorrow^ BTW, how the hell did you remember my friggin user name...>>...Thats weird..
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Title: Hey!!
Reviewed By: Demonicslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 10:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey it was good! (*Me-GothgirlVA*) You did awesome I give it a thumbs up!
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Title: Title...Hmmm..... well today Im WOMAN WITH A KILLER PITCHFORK FROM HELL!!!!!! (yesh Im insane)
Reviewed By: Chibi-Sorrow (though I thought I was logged in....) [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2004 21:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good fic! See, I told you it wasnt bad ^___^. You should listen to me more often! And now, Im going to go kill veggie for being an ass!! VEGGIE!!!! *chases after Veggie with the evil pitch for of hell* Veggie: AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! SAVE ME FROM THIS MAD ONNA!!!!!! *still chasing Veggie* Hurry up and update!!^^ This Sugar hyper spree will ware off soon, so hurry!!! Veggie: BLASTED WENCH STOP CHASING ME!!!!!! *glares* WHAT DID YOU SAY?!?!?! *starts stabbing him with Fork, still running* Veggie: AHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! KAMI HELP ME!!!!! *both run off into the distance* (hope the color thing works ^^;;;;) ^Chibi-Sorrow^ (thought not so sorrowful today...very hyper)
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Reviewed By: yen-dawg On: April 18, 2004 20:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Stay in the past tense- It sounds better if you have on tense in your story; HURRY UP AND UPDATE!!!!:) Good story- i like it
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Reviewed By: trunksvegetafrodo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 03:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: trunksvegetafrodo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2003 11:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Laina On: July 29, 2003 15:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yup, its definetly worth an update!!!! |
Reviewed By: bise b On: July 29, 2003 00:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
i like the story so far but there is a problem. chapter 2 is the ending of chapter one just a sentence was added at the end. i just wanted to let you know. bye! |
Reviewed By: Evil Saint On: July 27, 2003 16:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like what you've done so far. Please keep updating! |
Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2003 12:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
YOU TELL HIM BULMA! |
Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2003 12:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, good story so far. Awww. Poor lil guy. Waking up to find your father dead beside you. |
Reviewed By: YoukaiSaiyanPrincess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2003 09:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good story so far lil sis! You know I'd tell you if it weren't! *~*YoukaiSaiyanPrincess*~* |
