| "The Seventh Year" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
Title: whoa!
Reviewed By: kitten_meru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 16:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, this is comming allong rather well, keep up the good work!
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Title: Coolies
Reviewed By: Kaiyo Azalea [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 23:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story lots, but could you update? Pretty please?!?! Greats story keep writing.
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Reviewed By: shawna On: October 23, 2004 19:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
your plot is good but you really need to separate the characters thoughts and such its hard to tell the differance between all of them.
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Reviewed By: drkangel1890 On: October 10, 2004 15:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
i found it quiet interesting please continue but i did find it hard to understand...You used "i" alot and i sometimes did notknow who was talking maybe it was just me but it is a very good story and has alot of potentail
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Reviewed By: inu yashas witch [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2004 11:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
IT waS SO COOL PLEASE UPDATE I SO WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT
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Title: please continue
Reviewed By: amanda01 On: December 25, 2003 16:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i was wondering if harry is really dead and plz continue soon i have noticed you have'nt update regularly!
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: Hobbs [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2003 22:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please put more chapters up soon!!! It is a great start, but you need to update it move often or get a friend to update it for you if you don't have time. Great story!!!
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Reviewed By: Kria Devils [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2003 00:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU ARE CRAZY IF YOU DONT UPDATE!!THIS STORY IS SO GOOD!!SO WRITE MORE!!PLEASE!! BYE(^_^)
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Reviewed By: giftedone01 On: September 14, 2003 22:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
this is a good story!! I cant wait to see what Kagome will do next!!! Ihope you keep updating and soon!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Inu-Yasha_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2003 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it please update soon |
Reviewed By: Demonmiko On: July 30, 2003 20:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's a great begining I can't wait for the next chapter, so please update soon but if you can't I'll understand. |
Reviewed By: Matoko On: July 29, 2003 22:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's great so far, but in the first chapter (not the prologue) I had some trouble figuring out who was saying what. Anyway PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! |
Reviewed By: Rika On: July 29, 2003 00:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Everyone that doesn't or didn't review or like this story is MENTALLY RETARDED!! I repeat anyone and everyone that didn't like this story is METALLY RETARDED AND HAS TO GO TO THE HOSPITAL TO GET BRAIN SURGERY!!!-_- Anyway it's great so far and it deserves more than 3 reviews! :O ::vein pop:: EVERY ONE MUST BE MENTALLY RETARDED!! |
Reviewed By: Kano On: July 29, 2003 00:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's great so far! Please updat soon!! |
Reviewed By: Midnight_001 On: July 26, 2003 13:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I love it up date soon! |
Reviewed By: Midnight_001 On: July 26, 2003 02:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your starting out good
give me more |
Reviewed By: Rika On: July 30, 2003 15:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yay!!! Another chapter! THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU!!! It was great ;) Please update soon but don't rush 'cause it tends to not turn out right if you do (that happened to me) |
