| "Blood or Love" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: update soon!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: BloodForbiddenVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2008 13:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon!! Kur/Kag PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2005 15:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ignore the critisism from others this story sound great please continue writing it! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: blood or love
Reviewed By: mimiru On: September 21, 2003 00:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay the stories good but please do not make the words so big it's hard to read and it hurts my eye's okay well see ya. |
Reviewed By: misao On: July 27, 2003 13:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
The plot and idea of the story is great, however your style of writing is bad along with your choice of slang. Trying to read the story is difficult because of no capitalizations and no paragraphs. Make it easier for your readers and ident your paragraphs k? I hope I'm not too hard on you, but I'm just giving you constructive critiscism. |
Reviewed By: sunstar On: July 26, 2003 20:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww..this is so cute please make it a kur/kag update soon i really like!!
ja ne. |
Reviewed By: misty the hanyou On: July 26, 2003 14:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write more |
