| "The circle of seven" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: k-chan On: July 30, 2003 19:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it plz add more. |
Reviewed By: sapphire On: July 29, 2003 06:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
intresting start - but that was mean of you to leave it there hope we have another chapter soon |
Reviewed By: FairysGift On: July 28, 2003 12:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the way you have considered what might happen when Yami and Yugi collect all of the millennium items and put them back where they belong. You have started off your story well. Lets hope that your future chapters are all as good as this one. |
Reviewed By: stafire` On: July 28, 2003 02:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
iliked this stori it was great pase right more. |
Reviewed By: Riley Maxwell [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2003 14:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Interesting..very interesting. I'm curious to know of what happens next. |
