| "Those Two Years" Reviews/Comments [ 63 ] |
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 17:48 CDT
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I love it! Very nice. Too bad Ryou won't be in it though, oh well.
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Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 09:13 CDT
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interesting new chapter! plz update more soon!
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Reviewed By: Toki Mirage (too lazy to sign on) On: June 07, 2004 22:44 CDT
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When are you REALLY gonna update? i've already read this!
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Reviewed By: The Chaotic Ones~ *not signed in right now.... On: May 12, 2004 21:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great!!!! I realy hope you write more soon!!!! when will Yugi use shadow magic again? i thought that was pretty cool. he should probably use it when he protects his new friends, harry draco and the others. that would be quite a way to reveal himself wouldnt it? More soon please this is GREAT!!!!
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Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 01:26 CDT
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cute. do they, yami and yugi, find each other and get back together? plz update!
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Reviewed By: /Strega On: April 18, 2004 04:55 CDT
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Glad you updated! I like the Yugi/Draco relationship. It's very different but not bad at all. And don't get upset with people pointing out gramar mistakes and what not. The only thing you can do is improve it, if you wish. Take heart that your writing is at least interesting. And that's something that cannot be learned. K. Update soon! Thanks for the read!
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Reviewed By: Shadows_Of_The_Past [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 02:47 CDT
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I can't believe your friend did that to you! It's happened to me often enough, but you have an excellent writing style. I don't mind lemons that much, just not a huge fan *shrugs*. Please forgive me if I offended you in any way. I loved the chapter, and I'm off to read Gone again as soon as I get on in the morning. Keep up the good work! ^-^
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Reviewed By: Shadows_Of_The_Past [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 02:47 CDT
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I can't believe your friend did that to you! It's happened to me often enough, but you have an excellent writing style. I don't mind lemons that much, just not a huge fan *shrugs*. Please forgive me if I offended you in any way. I loved the chapter, and I'm off to read Gone again as soon as I get on in the morning. Keep up the good work! ^-^
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Reviewed By: persom On: April 17, 2004 17:18 CDT
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you got one of your facs wrong- draco is Latin not french. other then that it's not bad
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Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2004 08:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
interesting job! plz update soon!
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Reviewed By: Writer for Hire [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2004 20:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Overall, it's pretty good. The one thing I would suggest, though, is to cut out the in-text author's notes, because the story is much more enjoyable without them and they disrupt the reading process. Other than that minor thing, however, this is pretty cute.
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Reviewed By: JaggedLittlePill [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2004 13:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AIYAAAAAAA!!!!!! I LOVE IT SOOOOOOO MUCH!!!You have an awesome idea here and ohh.....NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm remembering I have to wait for an update...NOOOOOOOO!!!!!! But Eh..I can handle it..Awesome job..I love the blindfold part and the leading through the castle hehe ^__~ And Yugi's smirking and winking...bob I can't(but will) wait for you next update hehe.Keep up the awesome work and I'll see ya again..Ciao!
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 16:54 CST
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OMG, I love it! I have probelms with updating too, don't worry! Anyway, I just thought I'd say, black gold is actually a nickname for oil or coal, I forget which. But I liked the way you used it in this story! ^_~ I love the winkyness! I love to wink! ^_~ Yugi? Sadistic? I LOVE IT! I hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: EriolSirian On: March 21, 2004 17:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is really nice. I think that you've made the biggest undestatement saying that you have Yuugi being a bit OOC. He's acting like Yami for Kami's sake. What is the deal? Draco is Latin for dragon and Malfoy is French. Off handedly anyways. Draco-Dragon Malfoy-Mal foi-Bad Faith. So an off handed translation is Dragon of Bad Faith or my calling for him, Dragon Kept in Bad Faith. Severus is how you spell Snape's name.
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Title: Continu plz
Reviewed By: GemJewel On: March 20, 2004 23:57 CST
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Your story is great so plz continue it
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