| "Those Two Years" Reviews/Comments [ 63 ] |
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Reviewed By: kagomegirl21 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2006 11:37 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is so kool!!! update again soon onegai!!!! i want to see what happens next!!!
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Reviewed By: Ryous_fav_gurl On: June 24, 2005 13:32 CDT
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PLEAS UP DATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ryous_fav_gurl On: June 24, 2005 12:42 CDT
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Yamis name is Atemu.
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Reviewed By: ryous_fav_gurla On: June 24, 2005 12:25 CDT
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his name is Mahaado
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Reviewed By: Shadows_Of_The_Past [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 19:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The best stories always seem to die off. If you're still out there and checking into your account once in a while, know you still have fans. ^-^ Until then, I'll just keep re-reading it. X3
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Title: bloody brilient!!
Reviewed By: saphira_draco [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 00:07 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
y dont u write more? i dont know how many times ive read this.u r hidding from a great thing u know.u could win compotions whith stories like dis!!plz write more, on dis 1 espiclely(sp?) yours true' 'dogs fly pink feet' p.s. i cant spell 4 hell either!!!
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Reviewed By: sharon (yugiohgirl03 still not in the mood to sign in) On: November 20, 2004 23:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
come on already more updates to story and give more flash backs to the past in acient egypt...please
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Reviewed By: mage13x On: September 12, 2004 23:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love this series. I like Yugi with the whole "Dark and Kinky" look, it suits him very well. Can't wait till you update.
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Reviewed By: michew [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2004 17:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ummmmm... would you plz update soon??? cause u havent updated this story for 2 or 3 months and i really like it so i want to know whats going to happen. anyway, (hopefully) update soon!!!
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Title: Update?? Plese!!
Reviewed By: Stormyronin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 03:37 CDT
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Please update this story SOON!!!! It's one of my favourite crossovers of these two!!!!
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Reviewed By: Skeren Dreamera (not logged in) On: June 28, 2004 08:44 CDT
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Ahh, I have found yet another story that I adore! Wonderfull, Wonderfull day! ::grins:: Don't mind me. Hey, I want to see Yugi in a Potions class or something so he can talk with Snape. ::is a Snape fan:: Ummm... Hmm, I'm not sure *what* to suggest, but you made it look like Severous and Yugi had an entire ganging up with each other best friends thing going if you understand what I mean? I can just see Severus talking to Yugi and the pair of them planning out their 'evil' student ruination classes, AKA trust games and potions that go boom when applied to Nevil. ::thinks:: I like how you are setting everything up, but I just have no ideas to give you just now otherwise I would, since you seem to be fond of asking for reader ideas... Thanks though!
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Title: YOU ARE AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: eragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 00:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
RIGHT MORE NOW!!!!!! you're the bestauthor! who cares if you cant spell, neither can I!
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Reviewed By: /Strega On: June 10, 2004 20:26 CDT
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Don't loose self esteem over the criticism of others. Constructive comments are useful and should be, at the least, considered. But while we naturally focus on the negative, we forget that there is a mental scale that we need to balance. I'm not all sunshine and singing ponies but I tend to weigh the good with the bad. Consider this. I don't read cross-overs really....but I will read yours'. I generally dislike the whole HP/Y combo idea but....I really like yours'. As for being 'weird' it is a compliment. Would you rather be trivial, predictable, and banal? Weird is often associated with that which is not status-quo. And who the HELL wants to be status-quo?! Could your writing need improvement? I'm sure it could. Has anyone reached the peek of their perfection and realize their full potential? I'm sure we haven't. (Hopefully not, anyway. I'm a visual artist and I need improvement. That's part of curse and gift of being creative. We know we can do better:) )So, you had it right. Don't stop writing....Write more often and improve. Don't forget that the person you wish to please most with your writing....is you. (OKAY! That's' enough of me. I'll get off my soap box...for now! Don't make me get it out again! *V_V )
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Reviewed By: Cleverkitty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 03:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a great author, but you grammar is HORRIBLE! You need something like "Microsoft Word" But anyway, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
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Reviewed By: eragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2004 01:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVEthe story and others.completly original. but,are ya gonna do anything 'bout da part when yugi hermione, the whole eye contact thing? random '?'. eragon
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