| "Zero Gate" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Rayne On: July 30, 2003 15:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like i said earlier...it is a very good fanfic so far. Need more to read lol. Keep up the good work.
Bye "Zero Eden". |
Reviewed By: Doralyn On: July 30, 2003 15:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I rated it truthfully. You may want to rewrite a bit of it, due to mispellings and punctuation. (SORRY!!) The plot seems very good, but could use a bit more...suspense in the rape scenes. I think some things were repeated too, so you may want to check that out. Overall, this is a good fanfic and i look forward to reading more of it. keep up the good work bry bry ^.^ |
Reviewed By: EternalShayla [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2003 23:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
thats good so far, please write more dude, ill be checking back! |
Reviewed By: DORA On: July 27, 2003 01:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello Byran I it was a cool part but I just need to know what the next part. |
Reviewed By: Layla On: July 27, 2003 01:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY IT WAS REALLY GOOD I LIKED IT I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART!! |
Reviewed By: Rayne On: July 27, 2003 00:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey "zero eden" !! i shouldn't need to say more than wow i mean you are a great writer. Can't think of anything else to say besides keep it up i want to read more lol :). |
